The Brevity Challenge – Sarah & Rohini invite us to borrow a six word story and expand on it or create one of our own. I created my own and expanded it.
Old pilings stand like soldiers in the tide, their shadows drowned in silver, ever still…. above them, dust of ancient stars collide, a river bent across the night’s dark hill.
The land behind us hums with amber light, Montauk’s glow a small and mortal thing, while overhead, ten billion years take flight in dust that makes the darkness swell and sing.
I stand there, feeling smaller by the mile, a speck upon a speck upon a shore, yet something in that vast and star-thrown aisle makes me feel closer to it all the more
Alone. The rocks kept watch. The sea stayed low. The galaxy leaned down to touch the deep…. and for one breath, before I had to go, I held the whole of heaven, mine to keep.
Written for Tanka Tuesday where our host, Colleen, asks us to write a bussokuseki, a tanka with an additional 7-syllable line at the end. Inspired by an image by my amici at Blog 57.
Written for Tanka Tuesday where our host, Colleen, asks us to write a tanka puente on the theme of opposites, such as light vs dark, using a quote of our choosing as the bridge.
Written for Wea’ve Written Weekly. Our PoW Benjamin asks us to write a poem about dreaming of having more time to ourselves …. but how do we feel after the novelty wears off?