Written for dVerse Prosery: “Of Jaguars and the Night”. Our host, Merril, invites us to write prose in 144 words incorporating the line below from “Jaguar Song” by Arthur Sze.
The Brevity Challenge – Sarah & Rohini invite us to borrow a six word story and expand on it or create one of our own. I created my own and expanded it.
Inspired by Max’s blog, ‘Old Steam Ships’ – this is my story based on facts about the SS Eastland disaster in the voice of Harry B. Thayer, President of Western Electric, who chartered the ship for 2,500 employees and their families for a company picnic. Thanks, Max!
Old pilings stand like soldiers in the tide, their shadows drowned in silver, ever still…. above them, dust of ancient stars collide, a river bent across the night’s dark hill.
The land behind us hums with amber light, Montauk’s glow a small and mortal thing, while overhead, ten billion years take flight in dust that makes the darkness swell and sing.
I stand there, feeling smaller by the mile, a speck upon a speck upon a shore, yet something in that vast and star-thrown aisle makes me feel closer to it all the more
Alone. The rocks kept watch. The sea stayed low. The galaxy leaned down to touch the deep…. and for one breath, before I had to go, I held the whole of heaven, mine to keep.
Written for Tanka Tuesday where our host, Colleen, asks us to write a bussokuseki, a tanka with an additional 7-syllable line at the end. Inspired by an image by my amici at Blog 57.