Written for dVerse Poetics – “Adagio
for Strings”. Our host, Kim, asks us to
listen to the music and write a poem
expressing our thoughts and feelings.

A single step in the dark,
a breath held in the quiet room.
Your hand finds mine,
a trembling arc,
cutting through the heavy gloom.
We do not speak of loss or time,
or how the fragile hours bend;
we only climb, we softly climb,
toward a peak that knows no end.
And then the swelling sorrow breaks
into a vast and golden sea.
Every sleeping pulse awakes,
drowning all the world in we.
If love is grief with shining eyes,
a soaring cry the heart must make,
then let the highest chord arise,
and break for you, and break for me.
The final echo fades away,
suspended on a breathless thread.
The dark gives way to quiet day;
the words remain unsaid, unsaid.
No shadow falls across this grace,
as time holds still and lets us be:
just two hearts in an empty space,
bound by the quiet harmony.
NAR©2026
This is “Adagio for Strings” by Samuel Barber
Everything on the elephant trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicate, and may not be used without permission. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.
Sorrow and comfort shared, enlarges and enriches both.
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Exactly …. it’s foolish to assume we can have one without the other.
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Barber’s Adagio is so heartbreakingly beautiful. It’s one of my all-time favorite compositions.
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I feel the same way, Mitch. Thanks for stopping by.
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‘If love is grief with shining eyes, / a soaring cry the heart must make’—what a powerful, breathtaking couplet! You captured the swell and quiet ache of Barber’s Adagio so masterfully, Nancy. Beautifully written!
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Thank you, OM. Your comments are very kind and greatly appreciated. ☺️
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You’re welcome Nancy! Keep writing such beautiful piece 😊
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I’ll happily take that! Thanks, Ron.
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I love how you use imagery of darkness and quiet to amplify the overwhelming power of love and shared grief – just lovely 💕
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As we experience life, we learn that love and grief are deeply connected, both incredibly powerful forces naturally intertwined. Thank you for your beautiful and insightful comments, cara; they mean so much to me. 🥰
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You are so welcome 💞
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Beautifully written, Nancy, and I love the movement in your poem, following the flow of the music.
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Thank you, Kim. This was a wonderful challenge; you couldn’t have chosen a more inspiring piece of music.
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My pleasure, Nancy!
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A wonderful poem, accompanied by one of the most beautiful pieces of music ever written. And I’ve always loved the way Gustavo Dudamel conducts the orchestra, so full of feeling and expression.
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This is a stunning piece and the Vienna Philharmonic under the baton of Dudamel is inspiring. Thank you for your gracious comments, Clive; I’m pleased you enjoyed both my poem and the music. 🎶
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He inspires any orchestra he leads! Check out videos of him with the Venezuelan orchestra: simply amazing! I loved this post 😊
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Thanks for your lovely comments and for the tip; I will do that! 🥰
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Clive, I’ve been spending entirely too much time listening to music by Dudamel and the Venezuelan orchestra, but I don’t care! It’s exquisite. 🎶💙
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I’m pleased you like them. I thought you might! 😊
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Beautifully written
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Thank you, Sadje.
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My pleasure
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Gorgeous poem Nancy 💕💕🙌🙌
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Thanks for a beautiful comment, CA 🥰
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