Written for Sunday Whirl Wordle.
Here are Brenda’s prompt words:
firm, vice, world, wind, cares, someone,
worth, wound, word, here, seem, spiral

The rain had a grip on the city like a vice, and the wind off the Bowery smelled of cheap gin and even cheaper promises. The name’s Dirk Malone, private eye, and this is my office …. the kind of place where hope comes to die.
She walked in at half past ten, like Bacall wearing trouble and Chanel. “Somebody’s been following me, Mr. Malone” she said, voice quivering like a plucked cello string. “I think they mean to hurt me.”
I lit two cigarettes and passed one to her, watching the smoke spiral toward the water-stained ceiling. “Sweetheart, in this world, everybody’s got someone who wants to hurt them …. or worse. Question is whether you’re worth the bullet.”
She slid an envelope across the desk. Photos. A dead man in an alley, a wound in his chest deep enough to hold a whole mess of secrets. “That’s my husband,” she whispered. “They’re saying I did it. They’re wrong. I’m innocent.” Her voice was low but firm.
I’d heard that word before …. innocent …. from a dozen dames who weren’t. They show up at my office late at night with a story to sell, ruby lips dripping lies that seem like the truth. I wanted to believe this one but her story was too clean, too easy. It felt like the kind of case made to trap a fool, and I’d been called a fool plenty.
“Here‘s how this works, sister” I said, standing, grabbing my coat. “You tell me the truth …. all of it …. or you walk out that door and take your sob story with you.”
She didn’t blink. “The truth’s worse than the lie, Mr. Malone. You’ll see.”
Outside, the city was cold …. cold as ice. Nobody cares anymore.
NAR©2026
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A serial thriller that leaves us hanging just like in the olden days. I’m rooting for the woman, and for Dirk to clear her of suspicion.
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So glad to know you’re enjoying my Dirk Malone stories. Thanks very much!
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Another great Dirk Malone story. Excellent..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aP8Rbct_50Y&list=RDaP8Rbct_50Y&start_radio=1
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Thanks, Mark. I appreciate your gracious comments. Foreigner was very much a contender.
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One can only imagine!
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It’s for her to know and for Dirk to figure out!
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You could be the next Micky Spillane or James Elroy, you do know that? This needs a book, Nancy.
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You sweet talker, you! Thanks for this gracious comment, Phil. Writing a book is demanding work …. something I’m not willing to dedicate myself to at this point in my life. But I love the fact that you think I can. 🥰
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The world can definitely feel incredibly distant and cold sometimes.
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You got that right, Jim. Thanks!
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Dirk Malone has his work cut out for him, again. I love this!! 😍
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Yep, he better stay on his toes! Thanks Lisa; so glad you’re digging Dirk. 🥰
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This dame’s gonna be real trouble, Dirk. But I know he can handle it.
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If anyone can, it’s Dirk Malone! 🕵🏻♂️ Thanks, Lois!
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Another intrigue for Dirk 💜💜
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He’s back, sis! 😎 💜
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Lol Sis he never went away he was just lurking in the shadows 💜💜
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As any PI worth his salt would do! 💜
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Yes indeed 💜
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” …worth the bullet…” Biggest puzzle ever
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Dirk will put the pieces together.
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I think she might be ‘worth the bullet’ my friend …
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She’s surely worth a “shot”! 😄 Thanks, my dear friend! Cool song! 🎶💙
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Yes, the Rubens are a great Aussie group my friend 🎶💙🥰
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You’ve left it hanging at an intriguing point
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I’m dying to know what happens next! 😂 Thanks sis!
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Lol 😂
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Another Dirk Malone tale. Yay!
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Dirk’s back! 😎 Thanks, Fan.
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