Granted A Life

Written for the Great Minds Think Challenge –
“And that makes all the difference”. Our hosts
Sarah & Rohini invite us to write about a hero
or villain and choose to do one of two things:
1) Visualize how a hero might have become a
villain or vice versa by choosing to make a
different decision at a crucial moment … or …
2) Have a character reflect on their lives and
a key decision that brought him to that place.

The chains came off in the dark, and no one told him why.

He had expected the cross. He had made peace with it, not by choosing it but by ceasing to argue. Three nights in that hole had taught him the exact shape of his own fear and he had worn it smooth, the way water wears down a stone, until it no longer cut him. He had told himself he was ready.

Then a guard he didn’t recognize threw the bolt and said, “Go.”

“Go where?”

“Away. You’re released.”

Barabbas did not move for a long moment, certain this was some mistake or cruel joke. But the guard only stepped back, disgusted, as if Barabbas’ hesitation was an insult. So he went …. up the stairs, out through the gate, into a square full of people who had, an hour before, been shouting his name and demanding his freedom.

He did not understand what he had done to deserve this. That was the part that would not leave him.

He learned the answers in pieces, the way you learn the shape of a wound by pressing on it. There had been another man. A teacher, some said, though the word came from different mouths meaning different things …. healer, blasphemer, king, fool, messiah. The crowd had been given a choice, as was the custom at the feast, and they had chosen Barabbas. Not because they loved him, but because they hated the other man more, or feared him, or simply because a robber they understood and a man who spoke about kingdoms not of this world they did not.

He went and stood at the edge of the crowd that afternoon, not to watch …. he told himself he did not want to watch …. but because his legs carried him there anyway, the way an animal returns to the place of a killing. He saw the crossbeam go up the hill on another man’s shoulders. His crossbeam …. the one that had been measured for him …. and felt something crack in him that had nothing to do with fear.

It was not guilt, exactly …. guilt implies you did the wrong thing, and he had done nothing but exist in the space where a decision was made about him. It was the sense of standing at the edge of a debt so large he could not see its bottom, owed to a man he had never spoken to, who by every account he later gathered had spoken for him …. not knowing his name, not choosing him specifically, but dying in the shape the world had cut out for Barabbas.

He did not become a good man overnight; that is not how it works, no matter what the storytellers wish. He went back to the only life he knew, because a man needs to eat and old skills do not forget themselves simply because their owner has had a revelation on a hillside. But something in him had gone porous. He found he could not take from a farmer the way he once had, watching the man’s hands shake as he counted out what little he had …. because Barabbas kept seeing his own hands, empty, at the bottom of a pit, waiting for a mercy he had not earned. He began, without any plan for it, to give some of it back. Not all. He was not a saint. But he started leaving more than he took, in the houses of men who reminded him that they, too, might one day stand somewhere they didn’t deserve to be, granted a life on someone else’s account.

Years later, when the followers of that executed teacher had multiplied into something like a movement, whispering in upper rooms and catacombs about a man who did not stay dead, Barabbas heard the stories. He did not join them, not for a long time. It seemed, to him, an obscenity to walk into a room of people singing about the man whose place he had taken. What could he say? Thank you felt too small. I’m sorry felt like it was all about him, when the whole point was that it hadn’t been.

He was an old man before he said the words aloud in a room full of others …. not a confession, not a conversion …. just facts, offered plainly to people who deserved the truth. I am Barabbas. No one gasped. Most of them had never expected to see him again. He did not defend himself. He only stayed in his seat and let them look, and when the meal went on, he found that it went on around him rather than about him, which was the first time in his whole strange borrowed life that anything had.

He never called what happened to him a miracle. What he had was smaller and stranger than that, and harder to live inside of: an unpaid debt, taken out in his name without his signature, that he could spend the rest of his life trying to be worthy.

At the end, he was an unremarkable man. No one wrote his miracles down, because he performed none. He mended nets for fishermen too old to mend their own. He was buried, eventually, in a plot he had not paid for, because a friend insisted, and Barabbas, without irony, let someone else settle the account.

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This is “I Am Barabbas” by Josiah Queen

And that has made all the difference

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