Written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge

Along the Waveney’s muddy hem,
where reeds lean in to whisper,
a ghost in white stands perfectly still ….
then steps, one dark foot into the shimmer.
No hurry here. The morning belongs
to the heron’s pale cousin,
reading the water like a slow, silver page,
while the world holds its breath by the dozen.
A dagger beak. A mirror below.
The marsh grass watching and wishing
He knows what the river knows ….
that patience is its own kind of fishing.
NAR©2026
This is “Egret’s Song” by Ben Hermanski
Everything seen here was created by me, unless otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

Beautiful and evocative writing
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Beautiful Nancy 💜 ❤️
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Awesome
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