Written for Tanka Tuesday where Yvette
asks us to write a syllabic poem based on the theme
“It’s Vacation Time!” This is my shadorma.

Wild roses
bloom above the dune,
salt and pink,
morning stirs…
the family still sleeping
in our cedar house
Bare feet find
the old worn boardwalk…
cool sand waits,
tide pulls back,
children laugh at the cold rush…
oldest joy there is
Lobster rolls,
brown butter, cold wine,
the deck worn
smooth by years,
linger past the setting sun…
no one wants to leave
The ocean
holds every summer…
we have loved
all of them,
glittering out on the waves…
our beloved place
NAR©2026
Nancy’s Notes: Originally from Spain, shadorma is a short, unrhymed six-line poem (a sestet) characterized by a strict 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllable structure.
This is “Memory Motel” by The Rolling Stones
Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

Love the poem! We’re both thinking of beaches today.
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Glorious memories Sis… lovely thoughts.
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Beautiful ode to an idyllic vacation home! 💖 The Stones song is the perfect accompaniment.
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