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Golden Hour

Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬

Written for Sue & Gerry’s Weekly Prompts
Weekend Challenge word ‘expressive’.
Here’s where the prompts took me.

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The muezzin’s call drifted across the Bosphorus as Alara dipped her brush into copper-gilded oils. She had painted this skyline a hundred times …. the great dome rising like a held breath, the minarets stitching earth to heaven …. yet the canvas never felt finished.

Tonight was different. Threatening clouds gathered behind the mosque like dark velvet curtains, while the setting sun tore through them, furious and golden, painting everything in colors almost too expressive to believe. The old stones seemed to blush.

A fisherman on a felucca raised his hand in greeting as his boat drifted by Alara’s window. She raised her brush in reply.

In art school, her instructor had said that architecture cannot feel. Standing at her canvas overlooking the water, watching the Hagia Sophia in the last light, Alara decided that he had simply never seen Istanbul at dusk.

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This is “Istanbul” by Kulture Shock

Weekly Prompts Weekend Challenge – Expressive

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25 thoughts on “Golden Hour”

  2. The first thing that popped in my head was Aladdin when I saw the image. I probably have architecture period wrong, but that’s what I thought of. I enjoyed your story, especially considering the main character is an artist. 🙂 Have a boogietastic week!

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  3. Until I read your previous comment, your story made me believe you had seen Istanbul for yourself. Beautifully done, Nancy, and thank you for sharing it with our challenge.

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