Written for Crispina’s Crimson’s
Creative Challenge #069. I chose Pic #1.
Here’s where the image took me.

The sun descends through layers
of its own making –
copper, rust, the bruised plum
of gathering dusk –
caught momentarily by a cloud
that splits its burning disc in two,
as if the world were holding its breath
between heartbeats.
This is “Sundown” by Gordon Lightfoot
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Beautifully evocative, Nancy. Funny, I chose that image, too… just never go around to finishing what I was gonna write. Might still 😉
Love that tune.
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Crispina had a couple of gorgeous sunset photos; they were hard to resist.
Thanks. Gotta love Gordo.
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That she did. And yes, they are.
Indeed!
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Nancy, this is a gorgeous poem. So beautifully descriptive.
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Thank you, Eugi. I am proud of this one and so appreciative of your comments.
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You’re welcome, Nancy.
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Such a song 🎵
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He was the troubadour
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exactly
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Beautiful my dear! The sunsets here have been stunning! Tonight’s was a vibrant fuchsia!
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Hope you took some pix! It was gray and snowing all day here.
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Wonderfully descriptive Nancy, as I write this I’m watching the setting sun from my window – perfect timing!
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Thank you, dear Keith, and a good evening to you. 🌅
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Great post!
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Thank you, Di.
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Fantastic Ekphrastic
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Thanks much, Ron.
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Gorgeous verse.
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I bled this one. Thanks, Jodi.
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A beautiful description of the scene.
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Grazie, cara mia. ☺️
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🩷🩷🩷
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‘Brilliant’ sunset imagery my friend, a wonderful soundtrack from “Gordon” …
https://youtu.be/gGDDqTUrJXA
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Thanks so much, dear Ivor. This poem took a lot out of me and I’m very proud of it. Thanks for a great song. 🥰🎶
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Yes … I know, getting a poem to express your thoughts, can be very draining my friend .. 📖💕🎶🥰
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Beautiful poem.
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Thanks very much, Iris.
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What a beautiful description I especially love the last two lines and great track too 🙌
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Thanks, Ange! I’m so glad you think so. I spent a lot of time on this one. 🧡
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I certainly do ❤️
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