Written for Sadje’s weekly query:
“What Do You See” and for Val’s
Haiku Scavenger Hunt #13 where
the challenge is to write a pixiku ,
inspired by the image shown below.
steel rails hum monotonously
a gray suit gets lost inside a screen
outside the world revolves unseen
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#WDYS
Nancy’s Notes: The pixiku was invented by Alice E.P. Stephenson as a “wild child” of the combination of the haiku and the senryu. The poem is 3 lines but there is no syllable count restriction The poem should reflect a life experience or original personal quote. Uppercase and capital letters are allowed.
This is “Everybody’s On the Phone” by Jimmy Buffett
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