Written for Muse On Monday.
Our challenge is to write a story
about a piece of obsolete technology.
Thanks to Brian at bushboys world
for allowing me to use his photo.
Ray had a rule: if a car cost more to fix than it was worth, you told the customer to walk away. So when Walt Pruitt drove his flatbed in with a dilapidated Ford pickup …. rusted frame, windows smashed out, wiring chewed through by mice …. Ray knew what he was going to say before he’d finished walking around it.
“Walt, I’ll be straight. You’d spend four times what this is worth.”
“I know what it’s worth.” Walt was pushing eighty and didn’t waste time mincing words. “I need it running by the ninth of October. I don’t care what it costs. I don’t care how it looks. I need it to run.”
That was three weeks away. Ray looked at the truck again, and something made him say, “Let me get it up on the lift first.”
Two days later, Ray’s son Dale found him elbow-deep in the engine bay. “You’re doing the Pruitt truck.”
“Looking at it.”
“Dad, the shop’s four months from closing. You can’t sink weeks into scrap.”
“If I can’t get it running clean by the ninth, I’ll tell Walt it’s done. You have my word.”
Dale gave him the look you give someone you love who’s about to do something you can’t stop, and went to back to work, shaking his head.
On the ninth day, pulling the bench seat, he found a shoebox wedged against the frame rail. Inside: a cassette tape, a pocketknife with a cracked handle, and a photograph …. a young man leaning against this same truck, paint still good, grinning at whoever held the camera. On the back, in pencil: Danny, summer ’81.
Ray sat with it a long moment, then put everything back exactly as he’d found it.
He didn’t ask Walt. He didn’t need to. He understood why a truck worth nothing to anyone else had to run again by a date that meant everything to one man.
He stopped being careful with his hours after that.
The truck started on the morning of the eighth, a day early …. rough start, coughed, nearly died, then settled into a grumbly idle. Ray drove it around the block himself first, listening for trouble, and heard none.
He could have made it look new …. straight frame, buffed paint, no history showing anywhere. It would have been the more impressive repair, but it wouldn’t have been this truck anymore.
Walt came by the next morning. He walked a slow circle around it, got in, and sat with both hands on the wheel the way Ray had the night before. He drove it once around the block and came back to pay.
“What do I owe you.” Not really a question …. just a man waiting for a number.
“Parts cost,” Ray said. “Nothing for the labor.”
“That’s not a fair trade for you.”
“No,” Ray agreed. “It isn’t.”
Neither of them explained further. Some jobs you take because the number makes sense. This one Ray had taken for reasons that didn’t show up on an invoice, and he suspected, watching Walt’s hands shake counting out cash …. not from age …. that he understood that better than most.
That night, Dale found him sweeping the shop. “He came for it, then.”
“He did.”
“Was it worth it?”
Ray thought of the photograph back in its shoebox, back under the seat, belonging to nobody but Walt and whoever Danny had been.
“Wrong question, son” Ray said, and kept sweeping.
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This is “We Rode In Trucks” by Luke Bryan
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Great story Nancy. Glad my photo helps to illustrate the words
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