Written for Reena’s Xploration Challenge.
Our challenge is to ponder the words below
and use them in a piece of any form or size:
light ~ fall ~ current ~ break

pale light
settles on stone
the current murmurs on
carrying seeds that drift downstream
they turn
they learn
to trust the pull of something vast
a slow and steady fall
toward the break
of dawn
NAR©2026
This is “Stone Over Water” by Death Cab For Cutie
Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicated, and is not to be used without permission. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.
Lovely!
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Merci, mon amie! 😊
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everything’s downstream…
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Or downhill, depending on your point of view 😀
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Ah, a picturesque song by Death Cab For Cutie, to go with your picturesque Cinquain my friend …
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Thank you, my dear friend. You have chosen one of my favorite Kinks songs 🎶💙
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An oldie but goodie my friend 🎶🥰
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You made the reverse cinquain so picturesque.
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Thank you, Reena. The cinquain is one of my favorite forms; I think it is a good fit for your challenge.
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Yes. I love the succinctness of the format.
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How lovely Nance – a quiet, contemplative poem serene and delicate yet grounded 💕
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Beautiful description and feedback, Ange. Thanks so much. 😊
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You have caught the mood perfectly Sis.
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Thanks much, sis! Lovely song 🎶
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I just love the lyrics so gentle and true 💜💜
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