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The Walk

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Written for Violet’s Literary Quote Challenge.

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Emily had worked at the county animal shelter for eleven years, and over time she found that the difficult decisions never got easier. The chart in her hand listed a name …. Max, a graying German shepherd mix with cloudy eyes and a limp he’d had since before he was even brought in. She figured he was probably around fourteen years old. No bites reported, no trouble of any kind, but arthritis so bad he could barely stand for his morning walk.

Trevor, one of the shelter volunteers, hovered by the kennel door, clipboard pressed to his chest like a shield. “There’s still the Sullivans,” he said. “They looked at a few senior dogs last week.”

“They looked. They didn’t call back.” Emily crouched by the kennel, and Max lifted his head, tail giving one slow thump against the concrete.

“Maybe if we wait another week….”

“We’ve already waited six weeks.” She said it gently, not as a rebuke. Trevor was young enough that every decision still felt like it should have a clear, positive answer.

He crouched down beside her. “How do you ever know for certain that you are doing the right thing?”

Emily didn’t answer right away. She scratched behind Max’s ear, and he leaned into her hand like he always did, trusting completely, the way animals do when they’ve decided a person is safe.

“You don’t,” she said finally. “Not for certain. You just try to make sure the choice comes from someplace honest, and you carry it, whatever it costs you.”

Trevor looked away, blinking back tears.

“Some days that’s easier to believe than others,” Emily added. “Today just isn’t one of the easy days.”

She stood, gate latch cold under her fingers. Max’s tail thumped once more, unknowing but patiently trusting. Somewhere down the row, a younger dog barked loudly, full of hope.

Emily knew what had to be done. She opened the gate, clipped a leash to Max’s collar, and whispered something in his ear. He looked up at her and softly nudged her chin with his head.

“Let’s go home, boy.”

And that’s all Max had to hear. He barely limped at all as Emily led him toward her car and a new lease on life …. her third foster so far this year.

Certainty be damned.

NAR©2026

Violet’s Literary Quote: “How do you ever know for certain that you are doing the right thing?” from All the Light We Cannot See by Anthony Doerr

This is “Almost Home” by Moby, feat. Damien Jurado

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45 thoughts on “The Walk”

  11. Beautiful story. During our long history with pets, we’ve had two Yorkies and one Silkie, in addition to five cats, two bunnies and God only knows how many guppies! Most of them are gone, including the dogs. The loss of the third dog hit my wife especially hard. For now, she doesn’t want to get any new dog or other pets. We still have two cat ladies that are senior citizens, or should I say senior catizens? 🙂

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    1. Thanks very much for this heartwarming story, Christian. I can truly relate. Over the course of 54 years of marriage, my husband and I have shared our home with 14 cats, 13 of whom have crossed over the bridge. That’s a lot of kitties to love, lose and mourn, but we knew the day would eventually come for each of them. We loved them all, just as you and your wife do. I’m sorry she’s having such a rough time. I hope she will soon comes to terms with your dog’s passing. It’s never easy. ☺️

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  12. I adopted a German Shepard from a shelter, and they told me that she was probably around 4 years old, but when I brought her to the vet, he said she was at least 6. She lasted another six years before her hind legs gave out.

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  14. I have done the walk of sadness into the vets with an elder dog twice- I cannot even imagine what it must be like to have to deal with that as a part of your job. This was so well put together Nancy- I almost offered to adopt Max myself.

    Thank you so much for sharing your inspiration!

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    1. I’ve been there, too. Our son was going to be a vet but couldn’t handle the idea of the walk. This storyline was the first one that came to mind when I read your quote and I’m glad I stuck with it. It’s a story that hits close to home for many of us. Thanks for your lovely comments and for an inspiring quote.

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  16. I’m deeply touched by your lovely, compassionate story … I’ve always got some tissues on my desk for such moments my friend … woof, woof, from Frankie 🐶💕🎵, and I loved the song by Moby …

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    1. I’ve been an animal lover since I was a little girl; my mother said dogs and cats would follow me home! I am so pleased to know my story was special to you, my dear friend; that warms my heart. Woof, woof to Frankie. I’m so glad he enjoyed my story, too! 🥰🐶💕

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  17. What a wonderful contribution to Violet’s Literary Quote Challenge. ✨ It’s always fascinating to see how writers transform a powerful quote into a unique reflection or story. Looking forward to reading your creative interpretation.

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