Written for Tanka Tuesday where
Melissa challenges us to write a lai.

drawn toward the bright white,
longing for night’s light…
no fear.
wings flutter, ignite
against the dark night…
to sear.
pulled beyond its might,
consumed in delight…
too near.
NAR©2026
Nancy’s Notes: A lai is a French form that is comprised of nine lines, each with a specific syllable count. The rhyme scheme is a/a/b/a/a/b/a/a/b. Lines ending with an “a” rhyme have five syllables and the lines ending with a “b” rhyme have two syllables.
This is “Moth to the Flame” by Thunder
Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

Excellent Lai poem, Nancy. The moth flies too close to the candlelight! 💜
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Thanks Colleen; this was such an interesting form. So pleased you enjoyed it. 🤩
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Beautifully done, my dear…
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Thanks, darlin’! I was especially pleased with this graphic! 😊
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It was very cool!
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This is perfect Sis . l you’ve caught the essence of the moths nightly addiction to the flame 💜💜💜
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I so pleased to know you felt that connection, Sis. Thanks so much! 💜
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you make this form look so simple Nance when it is in fact quite tricky- brilliantly executed 🙌
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Thanks very much, Ange. This was a wonderful new challenge; I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. ♥️
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A lovely poem, Nancy.
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Mille grazie, caro Keith.
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Oooo so well done Nancy- and I love the image!
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IKR?! Sometimes the apps really out-do themselves. Thanks so much!
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You penned the ‘lai’ poem perfectly …
Another new poem format for me to try my friend
I don’t swallow krill
Nor kill for the thrill
Truth hurts
I’m an awkward dill
With a broken quill
Truth hurts
I can’t light the grill
My flame has no will
Truth hurts
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What fun! I love your lai, my dear friend; thanks for giving me a chuckle and for your always gracious comments. 🥰
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My absolute pleasure dear friend
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You capture their movement so well, Nancy.
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Thanks for such a wonderful comment, Esther. Much appreciated 😌
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Beautifully written Nancy
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Thank you, dear Sadje 😊
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👍🏼🩷👍🏼
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gorgeous Nance 🤩🤩🌟🌟
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Thanks very much, CA. So glad you like it! 😊
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