Written for Wea’ve Written Weekly.
Our PoW this week is Artie who has
suggested prompt lines for our poem.
Here’s where the prompts took me.
“my delicious walk in the rain”
“what it is that music is trying to say”

© Etsy
Wet afternoon.
Soil turning itself
over.
I walked until I stopped
and sat upon the empty bench…
just me,
just rain,
just that.
Then music did the same thing…
a cello phrase that stopped
just short of meaning,
hung there
in the afternoon
like rain-smell,
like soil,
like something…. turning.
This is what the world does
when it wants to speak…
it rains, it plays a cello phrase,
it turns the soil over slowly
for the ones who are listening,
just that,
just this,
that’s it.
NAR©2026
#W3
This is “Rainy Day” by Coldplay
Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, except where otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

I loved your delicate rain poem, and it rained all afternoon when I was the football yesterday, another excuse to stay inside behind the glass windows and have few more glasses of beer my friend … 🥰🍻
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Great poem – nature and art don’t always need a grand message to be profound, sometimes beauty is found in the feeling or the atmosphere created 💞
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Beautiful poetry.
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So pleased you like it, Sadje. Thank you. ☺️
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Most welcome sis
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