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The Last Evening – May 29, 1914

Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬

Inspired by a new blog called ‘Old Steam Ships’
by our friend, Max, I have written a fictionalized
account of Laurence Irving, an English dramatist
and actor, and his actress wife, Mabel Hackney.
They were two actual passengers aboard the
RMS Empress of Ireland and this is their story.

RMS Empress of Ireland
All images courtesy of Max @ Old Steam Ships

They descended the grand staircase together, Laurence in black tie and Mabel radiant in evening silk, the dark polished mahogany gleaming around them as though the ship itself were dressed for the occasion. Below, the first-class dining salon awaited …. a great oval room ringed by a mezzanine balcony, its ceiling arching overhead like the nave of some gilded cathedral at sea.

Dinner was leisurely and magnificent. Crystal caught the light. The conversation was easy, full of laughter and plans …. plays to be written, stages to be graced, a future laid before them as bright and open as the Atlantic sky. Afterward, there was dancing, and they danced as people do when life feels generous and the night unhurried.

They retired well past midnight, content. Outside, the river was calm. The Empress slid through the darkness of the St. Lawrence toward the open sea.

At 1:55 in the morning, the Norwegian collier Storstad emerged from a bank of fog and struck amidships. In fourteen minutes, the Empress of Ireland was gone. The cold water rushed in faster than a nightmare. There was no time to reach the grand staircase, no time for goodbyes …. only the dark and the cold and the sudden, terrible erasure of everything that had seemed so certain just hours before.

Of the 1,477 souls aboard, 1,012 perished. Among them, Laurence and Mabel, the stage’s brightest couple, swallowed together by a river that cared nothing for talent or love or the beauty of an evening well spent.

“They had such a wonderful night.”
— May 28, 1914

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This is “Empress of Ireland” by Three Pints Gone

RMS Empress of Ireland (Canada’s Titanic)

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27 thoughts on “The Last Evening – May 29, 1914”

  5. I’ve seen an Empress of Ireland ship fan have autographs signed by Laurence and Mabel and I learned a little about them…they were quite a couple and dedicated to each other…beautifully written Nancy. Thank you for mentioning them….and of course thank you for the link!

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      1. I’m happy you are giving these people more attention, Nancy. This tragedy deserved to be remembered. Even the Canadians that follow me didn’t know much about it…that’s not a put down…because I didn’t either at all.

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          1. I’m happy he is enjoying it…and please if I ever get any technical part wrong ask him to tell me. I’ll gladly be wrong to make it right.
            Yes, it is sad. The fog caused way more collisions than I would have ever thought.

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  8. A historical-fiction blog introduction—inspired by the “Old Steam Ships” blog, presenting a dramatized narrative about Laurence Irving and Mabel Hackney as passengers aboard the RMS Empress of Ireland, beginning their descent down the grand staircase. 🚢✨📖

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