Written for Reena’s Xploration Challenge,
where we are encouraged to wrap our heads
around the word ‘elusive’. Here’s my take.

She wears the old grace like a second skin,
white silk pressed against a whiter sky,
while snow erases everything that’s been
and leaves the question, who am I?
The hairpins hold what fingers cannot keep,
each knot a voice that says remember, stay –
yet something stirs beneath the beauty’s sleep,
a self as elusive as the light of day.
They dressed her in the map of where she’s from,
in blossoms stitched by a stranger’s hand.
She holds tradition’s weight and still feels numb
to all the ancient laws she cannot understand.
Is the lovely geisha’s tale the stuff of dreams,
a song we hear, a stirring tune we feel,
a whispered secret woven through life’s fragile seams,
or is it just what she is willing to reveal?
NAR©2026
This is “Merry Christmas, Mr. Lawrence” by Sakamoto Ryuichi
Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

very well done Nancy a well written poem has a lovely feel to it! ❤
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it, CA. Thank you 💕
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As elegantly stated as the geisha herself!
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Iwas totally into the research and writing of this piece. Arigatō
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Your poem is lovely and contains some interesting details. I enjoyed the beautiful music and image, too.
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Thanks very much, Lisa. It is a very interesting topic, something many people would have trouble understanding. I’m so glad you enjoyed the beautiful piano peace.
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Beautifully done, Nancy. The life of the Geisha seems so glamorous to the outsider and yet…
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That is very true, Dale. Researching this was fascinating; I need to find a good geisha novel. Thanks so much.
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Did you ever read Memoirs of a Geisha?
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Ages ago; may be time for a re-read.
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Me too 😉
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Beautiful Nancy, and this is such a lovely piece of music to go with it.
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Thanks so much, Di. I’m very glad you enjoyed the piano piece. 😌
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I remember seeing the movie too, but it was the music that stayed with me.
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Same here!
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I love the fragile yet tenacious mystery of your Geisha!
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Thank you, Liz! I’m so glad you felt the dichotomy here. This is such a fascinating subject.
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Geishas spend years mastering skills like the shamisen (a three-stringed instrument), traditional dancing, and the art of hosting. Their income comes strictly from these performance and entertainment services.
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Thank you, Jim. I did a fair amount of reading on the subject; prior to writing this poem I knew very little about the geisha.
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Lovely, sis, you fit the mood of the image perfectly.
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Thank you, D. It was a real pleasure writing this one. 💕
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Beautiful poetry, and a beautiful image, as well, Nancy.
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I’m so pleased you think so, Eugi. Thanks so much 😌
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You’re welcome, Nancy.
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Eloquent and delightfully delicate, Nancy … a dainty song from Shane and the Pogues
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Thank you, dear Ivor, for your lovely comments and this beautiful video. 🎶💙
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My great pleasure to send you a Pogues song my friend 🎶🥰📖
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your words to image- beautiful, Nancy…🤍
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Thanks so much, Destiny 😌
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my pleasure…🤍
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The Devdasi system in ancient India was similar to Geishas. A movie I saw on the subject haunts me to date.
So will the depth of this beautiful poem.
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You are most kind, Reena. I was fascinated by the research I did on geisha; now you have me intrigued about the Devdasi system. I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed my poem. Thank you very much. 😌
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Lovely words Nance and you created a wonderful image for your post too 💙
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Thanks very much, Ange; I was thrilled with the way the image turned out. ♥️
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I like this poem very much Nancy. I can feel it
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I’m so pleased to know that, Brian. The research on geisha was fascinating. Thank you for a lovely comment. 😌
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A beautiful poem Sis 💜.
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This is a wonderful song! Thanks so much, Willow 💜
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Its one of my favourites it lovely 🌹
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Nancy this is so beautiful and evocative
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Sadje, it was so interesting reading about this ancient custom. I’m very pleased to know you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much 😌
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It’s just amazing. 🤩
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