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Ruelle Chagouamigon

Written for Sadje’s “What Do You See” and for
Missy’s Mad Challenge where the prompt is to

write a story about two strangers who share a
moment that neither will ever speak of again.
Also for Violet’s Literary Challenge where she asks
us to include the following line into our writing:
“After what we have seen, we can never be who we were”

by Gemma Liviero. Here’s where the prompts took me.

© MaëvaVigier @ Unsplash

The snow fell without mercy on Old Montreal the night Father Ambrose stumbled into Ruelle Chagouamigon, a stolen chalice burning beneath his coat.

He nearly collided with the other man in the darkness.

Father di Pasquale stood pressed against the stone wall, breathing hard, a leather satchel clutched to his chest. Both men froze. Both men knew …. the way sinners always recognize each other.

“You’re from the diocese?” Ambrose whispered.

“Not anymore,” di Pasquale said.

The lamp above them hissed and flickered. In its amber glow, di Pasquale opened the satchel just enough. Ambrose glimpsed the edge of an ancient document …. a papal letter, centuries old, one that certain powerful men believed had been destroyed. One that could unravel everything.

Father Ambrose slowly drew the chalice from beneath his coat. It had been used, the Archbishop had confided, to seal “covenants” that God would never sanction.

Neither man had planned this exchange. Neither had planned any of it.

But standing in that frozen alley, strangers bound by matching grievances and matching sins, they understood what needed to happen. The chalice for the document. Evidence traded for evidence. Mutually assured silence replacing mutually assured destruction.

The transaction lasted eleven seconds. Their shared agreement was tacit: “After what we have seen, we can never again be who we were.”

Ambrose walked north. Di Pasquale walked south. Neither looked back.

The lamp continued burning, indifferent, casting its warm circle where two broken men had briefly stood and where the Church’s darkest modern secret had simply changed hands.

Somewhere, bells tolled midnight. And the city slept.

NAR©2026

This is “Holy Diver” by Dio

Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

3 thoughts on “Ruelle Chagouamigon”

  1. Oooo, I want more, Nancy…( I sound like Oliver Twist..🍜) … beautifully held tension and drama, ….so, Penn walks away, … wondering, pondering, …and looking for that elusive answer as the bell tolls! …😉….💙

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  2. Nancy! This is spectacular 😍 I love writing and reading about priests! This was so intriguing I wanted more! Thank you so much for joing mee in using this week’s literary quote i

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