Written for Muse on Monday where David
asks us to write a story where the main
character finds something in his food.
Also for FOWC With Fandango where
the prompt word is “clerk”. Here’s
where the prompts took me.

Wesley was halfway through his gas station burrito when his tooth cracked.
He spat into his palm …. a bloody molar, root and all. Weird, since he’d just been to the dentist. He tongued for the gap.
Nothing was missing.
He felt around his teeth with his finger. All there. He looked at the molar again, rolling it between his fingers. Human. Definitely human. But not his.
His stomach lurched. He peeled back the tortilla.
Three more teeth tumbled onto the wrapper. Bicuspid, incisor, another molar; a gold filling winked under the fluorescent lights.
“Hey!” Wesley’s voice cracked as he approached the counter. The clerk was playing Candy Crush on his phone and hadn’t looked up once since Wesley entered. “There’s….there’s teeth in my burrito.”
The clerk glanced over, expression flat. “Shift change was ten minutes ago. Not my problem.”
“Not your…….someone’s teeth are in my food!”
“Then don’t eat it.” The clerk continued his game.
Wesley took out his phone to call the police, then noticed the missing persons flyer taped to the wall. Local college student …. went missing three weeks ago. The smile in the photo showed a gold filling.
Same freakin’ tooth.
The clerk watched Wesley as he stared at the flyer. He put down his phone and stood up, his chair making a loud scraping noise on the grungy linoleum. Startled, Wesley turned around; something in the clerk’s eyes made Wesley’s blood run cold.
“Look man, you either pay for the burrito,” the clerk said in a low voice, “or you get the fuck outta my place. I don’t care which …. just do it NOW!”
Wesley took a step back, turned, and ran out. He jumped into his car and sped off without looking back.
He swore he could hear the clerk’s sadistic laugh halfway down the highway.
NAR©2026
This is “Heading Out To The Highway” by Judas Priest
All text and graphics are copyright for Nancy Richy and are not to be used without permission. NAR©2017-present.

If he didn’t get outa there he was a goner! X
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That’s for sure, CA! Thanks very much!
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Oh, that was nice and gruesome in the best way possible. Loved it, Nancy.
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Haha! That’s what he gets for eating a gas station burrito! This was great fun. Thanks, David.
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So creepy!
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Can you imagine?? 😳 Thanks very much, Lisa!
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Oh that was so scary and exciting- but I had to laugh at “Then don’t eat it.” – just perfect 👏🏻
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Thanks, Ange. I tried to make the clerk as antisocial and unlikable as possible. I’m glad the story gave you a laugh; that’s exactly what it was meant to do.
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🙌👌
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That is what you get when to eat a gas-station burrito. That sounds like a story that’s got some teeth in it. haha
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Hahaha!! Honestly, Mark, I can’t fathom eating anything from a gas station other than a candy bar or a bag of chips …. not that anything like this would ever happen …. would it? 😉
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I am not the kind of person that sues others, but if I found freaking teeth in a burrito, I would be calling a lawyer.
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I’m sure Wesley was just relieved to get out of there in one piece! Thanks, Jim.
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OMG Nancy! This is horror at its finest! I cannot even imagine.
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Did you watch The Sopranos? I’d be surprised if you didn’t. As I was writing this, all I could l think about was Christopher working the meat grinder at Satriale’s Pork Store …. and he wasn’t making sausage. Thanks so much, Jodi.
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You know I have binged it several times. I’ve been seriously considering getting Netflix again mainly for the Sopranos 😉
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I knew it! 😁
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Oh, that was a mouthful of troublesome ‘wisecracks’ my friend … lets hit the road and don’t come back no more
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Ah, the genius of Ray Charles! Thank you, my friend! 🥰 🎶
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An oldie, but goodie 🎶🥰
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That is horrible Nancy 🤢
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Thank you, Brian! I hope I haven’t turned you off to burritos. 🌯 😝
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I haven’t had a burrito in ages
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Nor I and I don’t miss them! But I do love a good fish taco 😋
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Oh yes fish tacos are delish 😋
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What a gory tale
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You said a mouthful, sis! 🤣
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😂
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If I were Wesley I’d still caii 9-1-1 once I was a safe distance from that gas station mini-mart. Although who buys a burrito at a gas station?
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That’s the first question you have to ask. No way, even if I was starving. Stale chips and flat soda would be preferable to that crap! Thanks, Fan.
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