Written for Sunday Whirl Wordle – #735. Our host is
Brenda Warren and these are our prompt words: hook,
sway, hearts, strip, chain, dizzy, sweep, you, stick, swell,
steam, and shock. Here’s where the prompts took me.

The dame had a hook in me from the moment she walked through my door, all sway and trouble. She wanted me to find her sister on the strip, where neon hearts promised everything and delivered nothing.
“You stick with me on this one, Malone,” she said, chain-smoking Luckies.
Three days later, I’m watching steam rise from a manhole cover on Fifth, tailing a numbers runner who might know something. The city’s got a swell of new faces lately …. all of them dirty. My head’s dizzy from the chase, the sleepless nights, the bourbon.
Then I see her. The sister. Not missing. Not in danger. Running the biggest protection racket in the precinct, bold as brass.
When I tell the dame, the shock in her eyes lasts maybe two seconds. “If you’re thinking of ratting me out, Malone….” then she pulls a .38 from her purse. Turns out blood runs cold in both sisters.
I manage to sweep her gun hand aside, but the bullet still finds the wall behind me, inches from my head.
Some cases you solve. Others you just survive.
NAR©2025
This is “Witness Protection” by Coco Montoya
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I had starred this one to come back to it. I am so glad that I did. You have a real talent for story telling.
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Thanks for a fabulous comment, Mark. I do enjoy writing my Dirk Malone stories. I’m glad you enjoy them. Writing.
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sometimes it’s better not to know…nice
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Dirk would agree with you. Thanks, Dylan.
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Neat cinematic film noir style story. I also love your musical choice! 🙂
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Thanks very much, Christian! I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed the read and the music.
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Nicely done 👍
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Thank you kindly!
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Good story!
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Thanks so much, Di. I love writing these stories.
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Classic Dirk Malone
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Thank you! I really do enjoy writing about him and his exploits.
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Oh yeah!
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Now that’s what I call a close shave!
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Another great story 💜💜
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Thanks so much, Willow. These stories are so much fun for me to write.
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Sisters are always trouble.
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Just what Dirk Malone doesn’t need! Thank you, Jim.
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I read the last line and the theme song from Perry Mason came to mind. And fade…..
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that is such a great theme. I think I have to play it! Thanks, Lois.
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I love it! Thanks, Nancy!
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My great pleasure!
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Fabulous! I can almost hear his voice as he narrates this.
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Thanks so very much, Sue! I love writing these stories and when I read a comment like yours, it makes it all worthwhile.
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Oh, that is lovely to hear, Nancy.
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Oh, that was a close shave for our Dirk Malone … he should’ve seen the writing on the wall, even through that ‘smoke’ haze …
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Great comment and great song! Thank you so much, dear Ivor. 🥰 🎶
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You’re fantastic stories always inspire my imagination and I enjoy writing my anecdotes 🎶📖😍🌏📘💙
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🥰 🎶🌏 💛
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I love this style of writing Nancy you do it so well🙌
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I love it too, Ange. It’s really so much fun. Thanks for your wonderful comments. ♡
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❤️
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Another great noir vignette, Nancy!
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Thanks, Fan. As you well know, they’re so much fun to write.
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Reminds me of the detective shows.
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Wonderful! That is exactly what I was hoping for. Thank you, dear Sadje.
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You’re most welcome dear friend
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Never trust a dame 😁
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😂 I don’t think Dirk got the memo!
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