Short Story

Weighing The Odds

Written for Sue & Gerry’s Weekly Prompts
Weekend Challenge
, using the term ‘Pros &
Cons’. Here’s were the prompt took me.

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Joss and Kylie met in college, became roommates and, ultimately, best friends. After graduation, they rented a great apartment together and opened their very popular bakery in SOHO. When Kylie had to go out of town for the weekend, Joss was floored when Kylie’s boyfriend, Greg, asked her out for drinks.

As Joss pondered her options, she made a list of Pros & Cons. On the Pro side, Greg was charming, handsome, and always made her laugh. On the Con side, it could ruin her friendship with Kylie, and she might end up feeling guilty and regretful.

After weighing the odds, Joss decided to go for it. She wore her favorite outfit and met Greg for drinks on Saturday evening at the designated spot. They talked, laughed, and got to know each other better …. so much better that Greg went back to Joss’ apartment and spent the night with her.

When they woke up the following morning, they both regretted their impulsive actions. Most of all they couldn’t believe how they betrayed Kylie. “She can never find out about this! She’ll never forgive us!” Joss cried pitifully to Greg.

“You’re damn right I won’t!”: it was Kylie who had returned early and caught Joss and Greg in flagrante. “I trusted you and you deceived me! Get dressed and get out, both of you! I don’t want to see your cheating faces again!”

There were no winners in this ill-fated game of Pros & Cons and in the end, three lives were changed forever. There was no way Kylie would ever forgive Joss and Greg for this betrayal, even when they crawled back pleading for her to give them one more chance. In time Kylie would move on with her life and she would heal but this was a blow she would never forget.

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35 thoughts on “Weighing The Odds”

  1. A horrible situation, heartbreaking and unforgivable! This is a great story, though. ☺️ I love Chrissie Hynde’s voice and she is wonderful in this song. I haven’t listened to any Pretenders in so long!

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  2. Great story! Either way, gender could be anything, with either one of the mc. I like the comment, we just take people as they are, and realize that things can change on a dime or a drink.

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  3. Love it! Over here, Joss, alongside Josh, is used as a shortened version of Joshua. I use it a lot for my son Joshua. You made it clear in the first paragraph that Joss was a girl by referring to her as ‘her’. Thank you, Nancy, for taking part in Pros & Cons.

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    1. Thanks very much for pointing that out, Sue. Everyone is entitled to their opinion and as long as it’s expressed in a civil manner, I won’t make a big deal out of it. I’m glad to know you enjoyed my story. It’s always a pleasure for me to contribute to your challenges.

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  4. I guess Joss and Kylie were much more than roommates and this is a weird triangle because both of these names can be used for males or females. Trust is broken when rules are ignored and boundaries are crossed and an act of sexual misconduct, or as you put it in flagrante certainly does both of these things. Nice story, Nancy although it took me a while to figure out that Joss and Kylie were both girls.

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      1. Years ago, two girls being a relationship would have been very confusing, but now that is totally acceptable, so I have to stop thinking about gender and look at everyone as just a person and it will take me a while for that to happen.

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          1. Lesbians are more accepted globally than gay men and I have never had a problem with sexual and romantic desire between women, but when women kiss each other in public, this can be seen as a close friendship, as men don’t do that unless they are gay.

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