Short Story

The Archivist

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Written for Only Murders In My Mind
Weekly Writing Prompt #71 and the
photo prompt shown below.
Here’s where the image took me.

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Elliot had tonight planned perfectly. After weeks of watching June at the library, he knew her schedule, her routine and her personality.

He broke into June’s apartment and was waiting for her in the bedroom, sitting in the corner in the dark when she walked in. She turned on the light, saw him and screamed, just like all the others.

June struggled like a scared little rabbit caught in a bear trap but she couldn’t escape Elliot. When he duct taped her to the bed posts, the fear in her eyes almost got to him … almost. He was going to have fun with this one, making the pain last as long as he could before watching her die.

When it was over, Elliot cleaned up in the bathroom and made an entry in his little black book … “#17 – June, the librarian. She fought like a wild cat. I didn’t think she had it in her.”

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This is “Psycho Killer” by Talking Heads

Weekly Writing Prompt

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26 thoughts on “The Archivist”

  2. Terrifying character and scary scene, writer Nancy. A cautionary tale, too. Be aware! Love the Talking Heads. 🎶 Will probably think of your story whenever I hear this song… A compliment to your engaging writing. ✍🏼

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    1. Thank you, Michele. It really is a terrifying story, made so much more real because it happens in towns just like ours to women just like you and me. This is the act of a violent and sick mind, possibly someone we know and trust. It’s unimaginable, isn’t it? Thanks for your ever gracious comments. They are always greatly appreciated. ☺️

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      1. You’re so welcome and thank you for your thoughtful replies and for sharing your creative writing and musical shares with us. I also appreciate being reminded to stay observant. Good evening to you. 🌛

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