Flash, Short Story

Is There A Detective In The House?

Written for Esther’s “Can You Tell A Story In…..? #279
This week we are faced with one or two challenges:
to write a story in exactly 7 words using the word ‘imposter’
and/or a story in exactly 50 words including the five required
prompts: ‘coat’, ‘pie’, ‘qualify’, ‘Latin’, ‘aunt’ and ‘maze. Never
one to shy away from a challenge, here’s my two-stories-in-one!

This is Diego …. or is it?
© Dreamstime

“Don’t answer the door! It’s an imposter!” …..

?   ✊🏼   ?    🕵🏻‍♀️    ?    🚪   ?

….. Aunt Maze, Detective, commanded so loudly, I nearly dropped my freshly-baked pie.

“But it’s Diego, your ‘Latin Lover’”, I teased.

“It’s not Diego! I’m sure!” Auntie insisted. “He’s wearing the wrong coat.”

“How does that qualify? I frowned. “Diego doesn’t even wear a coat.”

“Exactly!” Auntie exclaimed.

“Clever you, Auntie!”

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7 & 50 Words

This is “I Hear You Knocking” by Dave Edmunds

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