Written for Friday Fictioneers where we are asked
to get creative in 100 words or less using the
photo below for inspiration. Here’s my story.

“Did you get it?” Ray asked when the door opened.
“Yeah, but I had to shell out more money for it” grumbled Joe-Bob.
“That rat bastard! Hand it over … and a flashlight.” Ray demanded.
“This is primo, Joe-Bob! Gimme six Ds, will ya?”
Ray inserted the Ds and turned on his newly acquired battery-operated fan.
“Listen, Joe-Bob. When Uncle Lester died, he left me a slew of money. I’m gonna buy a state-of-the-art, solar-powered, non-electric RV. I’m stocking up batteries ‘cos when that asshole gets elected, gas and electric prices will be insane. I’m finally gonna beat the man!”
NAR©2024
100 Words
This is “Tax Man” by The Beatles
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This cracked me up (and the comments). There I was, thinking of sinister mob-like doings and then this. I love his attitude and the story. There’s no running away though, I’m afraid.
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This makes me very happy, GH; that’s exactly the reaction I was hoping for! No, there’s no running away, not even with an RV full of batteries!
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Perfect song for your story!
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Thanks, Dawn. I love that song!
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Great story, Nancy! Love the song!
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Thanks, RM. That’s one of my favorite Beatles songs.
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Dear Nancy,
I understand his concern. I find myself wanting to just step off the earth. Great song and probably the greatest album cover of all time! IMHO 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
We share the same feelings about the song, album cover and wanting to step off the earth sometimes. It is a dangerous and frightening place.
It was my intention this time to write something facetious and tongue-in-cheek. I was happy with the result and appreciate your comments.
Shalom
🕊️
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Oh dear… I hope there are a lot of batteries…
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He’s gonna need them!
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Great writing and a classic song.
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Thanks so much, Gary. Definitely an epic tune.
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Well, that was different! Nice one, Nancy!
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You know what, Keith (you’ll appreciate this); all I was striving for when I wrote this was to be different and (hopefully) humorous.
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This story made me grin in a very empathizing with him kind of way. That desire to just get an rv and disappear is very real.
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Ah, yes! If only we could!
Thanks, Anne
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Ray, and the likes of him, may be the last left driving. 😂 Fun storytelling, or perhaps predicting. 🤔
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It’s a combination of both; may the force be with us! ⚡️
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Yes, may it be, a positive one. 🤞🏻🙏🏻📿😬
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He’s going to need a lot of solars to drive to Canada
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Hmm …. I guess that depends on his starting point.
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I suppose it doesn’t hurt to prepare for armageddon.
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Lisa, I’m guessing Ray was a Boy Scout! 😃
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This wouldn’t be thinly veiled political comment, by any chance? Lizy
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Who, me? Never! I never talk politics.
I only make sub rosa comments and the occasional threat.
Bwahahaha!
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i wonder who that asshole is. curious mind wants to know. 🙂
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Needles under my fingernails can’t get me to tell!
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Very interesting story Nancy 😍
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Thank you, Sadje. I’m pretty sure it’s a one-of-a-kind! 😂🤣
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It sure is
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Yep, he sure is gonna beat The Man! Nice job.
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Gotta love Ray for trying. And if all else fails, he can drive his RV straight into Canada!
Thanks, D!
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Hahaha! Love your take. Most original!
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😂 😂
I read the story to Bill last night who said “you got all that from this photo?”
“Yep …. that’s the writing biz, baby!” [maniacal laughter]
Thanks, girlfriend!
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Haha! I love it. And yeah, Bill… you’d be surprised what goes on up in our noggins once we absorb a photo…
Have a fantabulous day!
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Great story and song, Nancy👏
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It’s amazing, the things that come to us sometimes! Thanks a bunch, Cindy!
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It’s so true! I love that! 🩷
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