Written for Jim’s Thursday Inspiration #231 –
“Come Softly To Me”. Here is my piece,
a Dectina Refrain followed by a haiku.

Do
You hear
Me tapping
On your window
Come softly darling
Sit right here beside me
Kiss my trembling fingertips
Take me in your arms and hold me
Tell me you will never let me go
Do you hear me tapping on your window
A petal soft kiss
Fluttering cherry blossoms
Love’s gentle breezes
NAR©2024
The Dectina Refrain is written as follows:
1st line is 1 syllable,
2nd line is 2 syllables,
3rd line is 3 syllables, and so on for 9 lines;
the 10th line is comprised of the first four lines
and written as one stand-alone line.
This is “Come Softly To Me” by the Fleetwoods
All text, graphics and videos are copyright for The Sicilian Storyteller, The Elephant’s Trunk and The Rhythm Section and are not to be used without permission. NAR©2017-present.
Very sweet..the song is so soothing too….
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It’s a romantic sound 🥰
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Thank you for this dreamy escape, writer Nancy. Pardon me while I float away… 🦋🎶
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My absolute pleasure, Michele. Float on! 🕊️
Mille grazie! 😊
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Siete i benvenuti. 🥰
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this is wonderful ❤️
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Thank you so much! What a lovely comment!
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This is just lovely, Nancy. I should try my hand at one of these one day…
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Thanks so much, Dale!
Yes, you should give it a go! I love writing Dectina Refrains; they’re fun with just enough of a challenge to make them interesting.
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You should see my list of poetry styles to try… good grief! Doesn’t mean I won’t eventually try them!
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I believe it! I’ve got a little list myself!
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I actually have a “draft post” will all sorts of ’em including examples 🙂
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Why am I not surprised?! I have something similar! 😂
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Well, there ya go. Sisters from another Mister!
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Wonderful poetry, Nancy.
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Thanks, Jim! The image you provided was delightfully inspiring.
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I went on two different AI sites and they each provided me with 4 pictures, and I thought this was the best out of the 8.
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You chose wisely.
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Perfect combination of forms, beautifully delivered.
Sweetened my AM coffee. Thanks!
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Lovely comment, Ron.
My pleasure. Thanks.
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Beautifully expressed, Nancy. Wonderful 💕
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Thank you, Grace. So glad you liked my write today. ♡
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My pleasure. Absolutely 💕
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Love them! Thanks N., such a sweet start to the day.
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It’s a pretty little tune, isn’t it!
Thanks, D! Have a lovely day ☀️
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Love the poem and the song. Now I want to sing it. lol
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Sing your heart out, Sighs!
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“Love’s gentle breezes”…. summed up beautifully, Nancy 🤍
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Thanks, Destiny. It’s a sweet little song, isn’t it? 🩶
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very much so 💫
and my pleasure 🤍
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