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LOVE IS BLIND

© Brenda Cox

They spotted each other in line for the bus.

It was a beautiful day for a ride through the city; a double decker was something new for them. The idea was appealing and romantic.

But now the excitement of the ride was eclipsed by the thrill of a rendezvous. They shared the same thought: once in the bus they would find each other.

The bus was crowded, difficult to see the other passengers. He moved up while she came down; they crossed paths unnoticed.

People got on and off and at the end it was just them, alone at last.

NAR © 2023
100 words

38 thoughts on “LOVE IS BLIND”

  1. Ha! That’s Hong Kong. I know that intersection.The sign on the bus reads “Fu Lu brings blessing to the new year again and again”. It’s a taxi stand outside Pacific Place.

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          1. We lived there many years. I can read the characters more easily than speaking Cantonese because it’s a tonal language and getting the tone or nuisance even slightly wrong results in a different word entirely.

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              1. Good morning! Cantonese doesn’t have a simplified form, whereas Mandarin has a simple and standard form. Most people in China speak the simplified form of Mandarin, plus their own dialects.

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