
Everything was going fine until it wasn’t. Then Joe and Willie met – two guys down on their luck.
Willie grew up in the street, standing outside saloons dancing a jig just to earn a coin for something to eat. Some days he’d get tossed a fresh cigarette; he’d break it in half, smoke one piece first and save the other behind his ear for later. One odd job led to another but nothing steady and he’d move on, some bread and cheese in a sack over his shoulder.
Now Joe was a lucky SOB. Born in a brothel, all the ladies took him to their bosoms. By the time he was eight, he knew what was what. Life was good until the girls got sick and the house was shut down. Joe fell through the cracks. He found a bit of money, some jewelry and food left behind, placed it in a bag and took off.
Willie and Joe met while hopping freight trains and chasing their dreams. Willie was on the track to nowhere but Joe had his sights on California gold. By now Willie was sick … “consumption”, he said; Joe kept an eye on him. When you got only one friend in the world, that person means something.
They planned to hop the freight train heading west. Willie never made it, coughing to death one night in the train yard. Joe placed Willie’s hat over his face and ran for the biggest, fastest iron horse California bound.
NAR © 2023
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This sounds like a pitch for a wonderful bromance…in the best way. Soon to be a full-length film?! ❤
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A bit like Midnight Cowboy meets Brokeback Mountain on the One After 909! 😎 ❤︎
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A compelling tale where you had me caring about both of them by the end of it.
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Thanks so much! I’m glad to hear you were able to connect with both Willie and Joe!
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You’re very welcome!
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Intriguing piece, Green Eyes.
Two lives neatly woven, and then frayed…
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Felt right to me, the vibes I got from the pic.
Sat down to write, the story already in my head.
Mille grazie, caro.
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A brief but special friendship between two lads from contrasting yet equally difficult backgrounds. A great take Nancy.
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Thanks, dearie! As I’ve been saying, when I woke up yesterday and saw the image, I immediately thought ‘Iron Horse’ and the story just came. I love when that happens! 🤗
Appreciate your thoughts today!
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Sometimes things end up well even if we think they’re not!
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An excellent reminder, dear Sighs!
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Reminded me so much of the vastly under-rated ‘Scarecrow’ with Gene Hackman and Al Pacino. Good one.
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Now that’s one movie I have not seen but with actors like that, it’s got to be good. Thanks, Doug!
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Watched “Scarecrow” last night. Two excellent actors. I can see why my story reminded you of the movie. The film was infinitely more disturbing and depressing than my write. Still, thanks for the tip; always up for a good flick.
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Stark contrast described between the lives of the two lads and their views on the world. And what ultimately became of their dreams.
But a touching tribute to friendship too.
There’s a lot in this one, Nancy.
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Thanks so much, Jenne! I appreciate your thoughts. As I told Misky, I looked at the image and this story came rushing at me. This is the result.
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So well written Nancy.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re most welcome
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This was a fun read! Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Hope! Thanks for your comments.
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I always liked the Doobie Brothers. Haven’t heard this song in years. Excellent story, too – an unexpected slant on the image.
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Yeah, the Doobies had it going on.
Thanks, Misky! Don’t ask me why but I saw the pic this AM and this story just came to me. When that happens, you just go for it.
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My goodness, two entire lives in five paragraphs!
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Gee, yeah! I didn’t even notice. Thanks, D!
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