
It was 7:00 AM when Jason Peterson’s cell rang. Reaching for the phone he saw the call was from Dr. Philip Zane. Jason froze. How long had it been since he last heard from Dr. Zane – twelve, possibly thirteen years? He hoped never to hear from him again. With great reluctance he answered the call.
“Dr. Zane. It’s been a long time. I assume there’s been a development.” Jason said with a strange combination of indifference and dread.
“Yes, Jason. Your father is showing signs of coming out of his coma. Considering the circumstances, I thought you’d want to be here when he wakes up” was the doctor’s response.
The only news Jason wanted to hear was that his father was finally dead. But no! The bastard refused to give up without a fight, damn him! Calming himself, Jason said “Thank you for the update, doctor. Please let me know when my father is fully conscious. ‘Considering the circumstances’ as you said, I want to be the first person to see my father when he‘s conscious. I’m sure you understand. Goodbye.”
Gregory Peterson had been in a coma ever since Jason bashed in his head that night of unspeakable horror in the Peterson house.
Jason was only fifteen when he called the police in a state of panic screaming out for help. His family was dead, butchered by his father, Gregory. When the police arrived at the house, they discovered four people savagely murdered, an unconscious man crumpled on the floor and Jason locked in the basement. The victims were taken to the morgue, the injured man transported to a high security hospital and Jason brought down to the police station.
The detectives sat in stunned silence as Jason described the events of that night:
“I was at Mike and Dan Kelly’s house smoking weed. Mike and Dan got really stoned and passed out around 1:00 so I left. When I got home I found everybody dead. My grandma and little brother Jake were tied to chairs. They’d both been shot in the head. My mom and sister Janice were on the sofa. They were naked and beaten so bad I could barely recognize them. They’d been raped, too. My dad just stood in the middle of the room, staring straight ahead like a crazed animal. He was clutching a huge bloody wrench.
Then he saw me and snapped to life. He came at me like a wild man swinging that wrench. All I could do was run, try to get out of his way. I stumbled and fell on top of Janice. Her blood was all over me and I scrambled away as fast as I could. I saw the gun on the floor and dove for it. I pointed it at my dad but it jammed. I threw the gun at him and he lunged at me but the wrench slipped out of his hands. I grabbed it and swung at him. He was gonna kill me, too, just like he killed all of them. I had to do something to protect myself so I bashed him over the head. I hit him pretty hard and he went down. I dropped the wrench and ran to the basement. I locked myself in and called 911. It was horrible, a nightmare. How could he do something so awful?”
And he broke down, sobbing.
After checking out Jason’s story with the Kellys, the police saw no reason to detain him. The dead were buried, Jason moved in with relatives and Gregory languished in a coma. The years went by.
Three days after the call from Dr. Zane, Jason heard from him again. Gregory was conscious and speaking but repeating only one word: “Jason”.
It was evening at the hospital, that twilight time when patients sleep and hospital staff chat quietly. A bored policeman sat outside Gregory’s room, dozing. He checked Jason’s visitor’s pass, did a cursory pat-down and told him he could go in. Gregory was asleep, neatly tucked in and handcuffed to the bed rails. In the dim light he looked old and frail. Jason flipped the switch flooding the room with light.
Abruptly awakened, Gregory mumbled his disapproval. Approaching the bed Jason could see the apprehension in his father’s eyes as he focused on his son’s sneering face.
Bending close so that their faces were just inches apart, Jason whispered menacingly “I wish you died that night, old man, just like everyone else. I should have finished you off. That was sloppy of me. Think how much easier if would have been without having this to deal with all these years. Well, we can’t have you spilling the beans now, can we?” Jason removed his cell phone from his pocket, the same one he used to call the police that grisly night. Smugly he thought how stupid the police were not asking to see his phone. It was laughable but then again his performance down at the station was magnificent. By the time he was finished every cop wanted to hug him and make all the terrifying images go away. Smugly he showed his father one selfie after the other; each one was of Jason standing over the bodies of his family, his victims. The final images were graphic videos of Jason raping his mother and sister. Too bad their mouths were taped shut; he would have love to have heard their screams.
With each photo Jason grinned as Gregory became more and more agitated, his breathing labored and his eyes bugging as his face turned crimson. He opened his mouth to cry out but only silence filled the room.
“What a shame to remove such works of art” Jason said as he deliberately deleted each photo, unfazed by the fact that Gregory was in extreme distress. He smiled coldly as his father died before his eyes. If only he could have bashed in his head just one more time.
Slipping into character, Jason strolled to the door of his father’s room and flung it open, screaming out for help.
NAR © 2021
What a story! I love the characters and imagery, and especially the ending.
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Thank you, Jaya. It’s definitely one of my stories clinging to the lunatic fringe. Appreciate you stopping by and taking a look.
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That psycho’s brain might look good in a jar like the woman’s head in the previous story! Mad scientists need to dissect it. They could slap it down on a plate, make a few cuts and say, “These are the receptors for murder. bwahahahah!” I await the next chapter!
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Haha!!! I think you just wrote it! Lots of wack-a-doos out there, Chris. Just don’t lose your head! 🤣
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Very nice story.
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Nancy…you sure you are not CSI?😁
The horror of being helpless on a bed when life is happening around you…let alone horrors happening from your own flesh and blood .
*enter all 3 !!!*
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You know what’s ironic, Nick? I don’t watch those shows and I hate bloody horror films but yet I can come up with something pretty gruesome. Don’t ask me where it comes from because I cannot say. Perhaps in another life I was a detective … or a serial killer! 🤣
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I know, right?
And that is one of the benefits of writing- allowing us to go to places we wouldn’t step foot onside otherwise!
I would never ask you that, Nancy.🌹
(to do so would mean that I would believe that all need to be explained under a microscope…and they don’t/should not.)
Again…bloody good writing!
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Mille grazie, caro. Apprezzo te e il tuo cuore gentile. 💟
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Ohmygosh…This story is so real and awesome! You pulled me in from the get go and toyed with me until the very end. It reminds me of a piece from Hitchcock’s magazine. Great job!!!
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Thanks so much! I honestly hate this genre of film or TV show and don’t know where my ideas come from. A strange but fertile imagination, I guess. Bwahaha!!
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You are welcome!
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Well that’s one was of getting out of family celebrations.
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🤣 See, there’s a positive side to everything!
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This one is so gory. I thought I knew Jason was the guilty one.
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A keen mind you have there, Sadje!
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Thanks Nancy.
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Oh … what a horrific twist to your horrendous story Nancy … I hope the wrench wasn’t a tool the plumber had left behind … yep, I always left something behind !!!
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Haha Ivor. I’m looking at you in a whole new light! 🤣
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Yes I’m a mixed “bag” , a industrial chemist, plumber, poet 🫤
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I had a feeling Jason might have been the true perpetrator, but how did he get Mike and Dan Kelly to give him his alibi? Or did the cops not bother to check with Mike and Dan? Good storytelling.
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Mike and Dan were too stoned, remember? They probably couldn’t remember anything when they came to. All they could tell the cops was Jason was with them that night. Glad you enjoyed the dark side.
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