In response to my friends at Fandangoâs One-Word Challenge,
todayâs word is âgambler.â
âSo, kid, your ma says you wanna work on my horse ranch. Is that right?â Micah asked Billy Bob.
âYes sir. I love everything âbout horses and I asked my ma if we can get one and she told me we couldnât afford one so the only way I can be around horses was to come work on your ranchâ Billy Bob answered, feet kicking up dust as he shuffled around nervously.
âWhat is it you love so much âbout horses, kid?â asked Micah.
âTheyâre the most beautiful animals I ever seen. I like the idea of taking a wild horse and workinâ with him every day, gettingâ him to trust youâ replied Billy Bob, his eyes lighting up with excitement.
âBreakinâ in a horse is one of hardest things I ever done, kid. Everything âbout being a horse rancher is hard. You ready for that?â Micah asked the kid.
âI reckon. All I know is I need to learn everything there is âbout horses, what makes âem tick, how to train âem to be the best horses ever. I canât think of anything more excitinâ ⊠except gettingâ rich, that is.â Billy Bob answered. He had a burning in him that Micah saw clearly now.
Micah removed his Stetson, pulled out a bandana from his back pocket and wiped his brow. “Well, kid. You sure got the desire, needinâ to know everything âbout horses. But you gotta understand one thing âbout workinâ on a horse ranch: it ainât gonna make you rich. Thatâs a real long shot!â Micah waited for Billy Bobâs reaction.
Billy Bob didnât hesitate. âThatâs ok, sir. Iâm smart; thatâs what everybody says anyway. Iâll learn right quick. Besides, I donât plan on workinâ on a horse ranch forever. No sir. Once I know everything there is to know âbout horses, Iâm gonna follow my dream.â
âAnd whatâs your dream, kidâ Micah asked, his curiosity aroused.
âIâm gonna be the smartest, most famous and richest gambler that ever wasâ Billy Bob replied with proud determination.
NAR © 2022
A brilliant story, and the ‘voice’ is spot on! As soon as I read the last bit the title made perfect sense, it’s a winner for me!
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Thank you, kindly! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I appreciate your very kind comments! đ
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I love the ending in the story Nancy, very cleaver and it made me laugh out loud. The first time I went to the horse races was in WA State and I picked a horse that was suppose to be the big loser. I made quite a bit of money with $20.00 so maybe the kid is smarter than we think. Great write. Big hugs and love, Joni
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Thanks, luv! Your comments always make me feel so good about my writing! I’m honored by what you have to say Big hugs and much love coming your way! đ
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You are a great story teller. That ending certainly surprised me. Excellent write. My pleasure sweetie. Sending love, hugs and prayers for good health for you and your family. đŠâ€ïžđčđ€đ
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a lovely read! May his wishes come true!! doing the jig and listening to you!! đ dancing too.
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Thanks, darlinâ! Iâm not placing any bets on his dreams coming true! Great dancing music lol đđ„łđ¶đ
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loved your story!
And the bottle of smoke!!
(any hidden Celtic strains in ya?)
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Thanks muchly, Nick! I think I watched too many cowboy movies when I was a kid lol! Sometimes a thought comes to you and sometimes it doesn’t; I got lucky this time. As far as the Celtic strains go, I’m pure Sicilian, both parents having been born there BUT Sicily was invaded by practically everyone so who knows? However, my eyes are Celtic green and my mister is 1/2 Irish so I guess that counts for something! I have a lot of friends in the UK so cheers to them from the Pogues!
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Loving the atmosphere built up in this snappy piece! â€
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PS – Jaya, I just wanted to mention that I am having trouble leaving comments on your posts which is a shame because you are an enchanting writer. I have the same problem with two other bloggers and WordPress is on the case; I have no idea what the issue is but I hope it’s solved soon. Meanwhile please know I love reading your work. You write as one with an old soul â exquisite and sublime. đ«
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Good to know! Iâll look into it âčïž
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A nice take, Nancy! This is a beautiful story, and twist at the end is superb. Well done !!
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Thank you, KK, for your kind words. Whenever I can I enjoy adding a twist at the end of my stories. I think it makes for interesting reading. I appreciate your comments.
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Oh, I didnât see the title; itâs awesomeness!!!
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This short story is wonderful! I know someone who is good with the ponies!!đđđ
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Thanks! It was a word challenge and the idea came to me out of nowhere … I think because I read somewhere that it’s Kenny Rogers birthday (The Gambler). Amazing what sticks in your subconscious! Glad you liked the story; I do very well at the track, placing my bets based on what color the jockey is wearing lol! đŽ
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Ha! I go by the name unless it urinates in the paddock or is a white horse.
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I enjoyed reading it here, too!
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