Mini Story

Gone

Written for Saturday Scribes.
We’re given an image and asked
to write our response in exactly
100 words. Here’s my take.

Image from Mike @ Saturday Scribes

Once, not too long ago, this was a bustling city, the bench an active and popular bus stop where people congregated on their way to work, school, home. Over time, the world and it’s inhabitants themselves began to erode – not just physically but mentally, emotionally, spiritually. Love became hate, kindness/indifference, humor/anger, acceptance/intolerance, peace/war, light/darkness, growth/decline, life/death. All turned into sand, falling apart at the slightest whisper, blown away in a subtle breeze. Suddenly neither money nor power mattered and the influential people dissipated the same as the lowly. Nothing could save them and all that remains is an empty bench.

NAR©2020
100 Words

This is “I’d Love To Change The World” by Ten Years After

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19 thoughts on “Gone”

  1. Nice to hear this classic song again, Nancy. AlvinLee of Ten Years After was consifdered to be the fastest guitar player in the world at one time. He earned the nicknames like “the fastest guitarist in the West”. His rapid playing was a highlight of his performance at the 1969 Woodstock Festival, which helped make him a rock and roll icon.

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  2. Gone, … not forgotten just gone, Nancy, … the desolation left is palpably felt, and so well put, … and matches that sad and lonely bench, … Would that we could change the world, …🎶 Alexa!!🎶…. 💙

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