Musing, Short Story

Hold On Tight

Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶

Written for Muse on Monday where David asks us
to write a story from the perspective of a blind person.

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As I sit in the roller coaster car, the vibrations beneath me pulse with anticipation. I can hear the excited chatter of those around me, their laughter mingling with the wind that rushes past, creating a symphony of exhilaration.

The safety bar clicks into place, a reassuring weight across my lap. I take a deep breath, inhaling the scent of popcorn and cotton candy that wafts through the air. My heart races, not just from the thrill of the ride, but from the energy that crackles in the atmosphere. I can feel the tension building, the car inching forward, climbing higher and higher. Each creak and groan of the metal tracks sends a tingling shiver through me.

We reach the peak. Time seems to stand still for a moment. I can hear the collective gasp of the riders, a sound that resonates with the sensation of the unknown. And then, we plunge downward! The rush of air hits me like a wave, and I can feel the euphoria coursing through my veins. My stomach flips, and laughter escapes my lips, mingling with the screams of those around me.

The twists and turns of the track are an unseen dance. Each sharp curve sends me leaning to one side, the centrifugal force pulling me in every direction. I let the feelings wash over me. The world is a blur of sound and movement, and I am lost in the moment, completely immersed in the thrill of the ride.

As we soar back up, I can hear the cheers of the crowd below, their excitement feeding into my own. The ride is a whirlwind, a chaotic blend of joy and adrenaline. And as we come to a stop, I feel a sense of triumph. My world is a tapestry of sounds and sensations, the threads woven into the fabric of experiences which are uniquely mine.


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This is “Helter Skelter” by the Beatles

Muse on Monday – August 25, 2025

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29 thoughts on “Hold On Tight”

  1. This is great, Nancy. I can’t imagine riding a rollercoaster blind, but I’m sure it would be quite a wild ride. You did a great job describing the sensations here. Thanks for participating in Muse, as always. 🙂

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    1. Thanks so much, David; it was a challenging write. I think it would be great fun to ride a rollercoaster wearing a blindfold! Our eyesight is second nature to us. Something as ordinary as getting on an escalator for the first time could prove to be intimidating for a blind person. Thanks again.

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  4. A hundred salute to you, Nancy, for this heart touching and evocative story, in which ears and other sense organs assume the role of eyes. I appreciate your sensitivity and imagination. Thanks a lot 🙏💐💗

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    1. Dear KK, I am both humbled and honored by your most gracious comments. I will admit this was a difficult challenge; I tried my best and I am pleased with the results. Thank you for taking the time to share your very kind thoughts with me. I am most appreciative. Aum Shanti 🙏🏼

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    1. it’s been a minute since I’ve ridden a roller coaster, but I always loved them. I would head straight for them and ride all day if I could.. Then the rides started going upside down and that was the end of my riding days. Thanks so much, dear Keith.

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