Written for Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge #23
where Robbie invites us to write a syllabic poem using
an implied metaphor. The metaphor I chose is
“my dogs are barking”. Here’s my tanka.

my dogs are barking
yip and yap with every step
each paw tired and sore
it’s been a long hard journey
now sit, stay, lie down, relax
NAR©2025
This is “Who Let The Dogs Out” by Baha Men
All text and graphics are copyright for Nancy’s Notes 🖊️🎶, The Sicilian Storyteller, The Elephant’s Trunk, The Rhythm Section, et al., and are not to be used without permission. NAR©2017-present.

Nancy – and a great track 🙌
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Thanks! I fits, I think.
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That was fantastic, Nancy!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette. Very much appreciated.
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Oh my goodness! This was so fun. You had me with Sole Survivor! I enjoyed your poem. 💜
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Thanks so much, Colleen! I’m so glad you enjoyed my piece.
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You’re welcome, Nancy.
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bark bark
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Woof!
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…and pull up a plate of biscuits and a glass of wine! 🐶🍷🍾🍷
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You read my mind! Cheers! 🍷
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Great poem, Nancy!
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Thanks, Chris! This was a great idea from Robbie at dVerse.
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This is just great Sis I love it 💜💜💜
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Thanks! This was a fun tanka! ♡
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Yes 💜💜indeed
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Perfect poem for a tiring day
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Thanks, Sadje. We all have days like that!
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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A classic “doggie” video, Nancy, we are just back from our afternoon walkies, with, aching feet and tired paws …
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Another great one from the Lagoon! Thank you, dear friend! 🥰🎶♡
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Yes, it was a lovely video and so suited to your article 🎶😊😍🐶
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🥰 🐶
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We’re off to sleep early tonight, I have an authors breakfast to go to in morning… a get together for stall holders/writers from the Annual Book Festival at Barwon Heads (Indie Authors) 😴😊😍📘
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Sounds quite official, dear Ivor! Sleep well 😴 🥰
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Yes, a sit down buffet breakfast at one Geelong’s bestest restaurant’s 😊😍📘
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😋
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