Written for Muse on Monday
where the challenge is to write
a story about an anachronism.
Using an image created by Kevin @
No Theme Thursday, here’s my take.

As the bell above the door jingled, Kennedy stepped into what she thought was a Verizon Wireless store, but the image before her was not what she expected. She looked around in confusion and disbelief. Instead of sleek devices, the shelves overflowed with jars, baskets of sugar candy, bolts of fabric, bushels of grain, utensils and basic provisions.
Behind the counter stood an older woman, her eyes warm and welcoming. “You’re not from around these parts are you?” she asked.
“Um, I was just looking for a new phone,” Kennedy stammered, her heart racing. “Where am I?”
“I’m Bess, the keeper of this store since 1763,” the woman replied, her brow furrowing. “You’ve crossed the veil, dear. This is a place where time has no dominion.”
“I don’t understand what’s happening” Kennedy declared.
“Perhaps you’re meant to find something here,” Bess mused, stepping aside to reveal an old, ornate mirror.
With a mix of trepidation and excitement, Sarah approached the mirror, realizing this could be the beginning of an incredible journey.
What secrets lay beyond its surface?
NAR©2025
This is “No Time” by The Guess Who
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Seems like that woman is used to that kind of question. I wonder how the store fronts outside change over the years.
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I’m sure she is, David. I actually thought about getting into the look of the store front but didn’t want to get too wordy. Thanks for the comments.
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an adventure awaits…
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Hopefully she won’t need her phone!
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A journey without a phone – that’s a good start! Nice one, Nancy
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She won’t need one where she’s going!
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Oh, I want more of this!
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These prompts and challenges are so much fun! Thanks, D!
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Neat story separate dimensions 💜💜
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As Fandango said, like the Twilight Zone. Thanks, Willow!
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yes indeed I saw that 💜💜
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I could hear Rod Serling reciting that first paragraph…
”As the bell above the door jingled, Kennedy stepped into what she thought was a Verizon Wireless store, but the image before her was not what she expected. She looked around in confusion and disbelief. Instead of sleek devices, the shelves overflowed with jars, baskets of sugar candy, bolts of fabric, bushels of grain, utensils and basic provisions. Kennedy had just crossed over into the Twilight Zone!”
https://youtu.be/ORbseYAkzRM?feature=shared
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Congrats! You’re the only one who’s caught on so far. That was quasi-intentional but I didn’t want it to sound cheesy or funny so I tempered the tone a bit. The old lady saying “You’ve crossed the veil, dear”, was my way of saying “You’ve entered the Twilight Zone”.
That was such a cool show and Rod Serling was perfect as host. Thanks, Fan.
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Life is a magical journey, and every corner, with every step taken, there is a new door to open/enter and explore …
https://youtu.be/0eaVpKVqYKI
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Thanks, dear Ivor! Great to hear this oldie again! 🎶
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My absolute pleasure, Nancy 😊🌏🎶🐶🇨🇦
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Sounds like the start of one hell of a journey, Nancy. Awesome write! 👏👏👏
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Thanks very much, Kevin.
Your image fit perfectly! 👵🏻
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Glad to be of service, Nancy! I hope you are having a great weekend. Sorry for the late reply. I’ve had…stuff going on. Again. 😄
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A very interesting story Nancy
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Thanks very much, Sadje.
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You’re very welcome ☺️
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I used the same song yesterday and it is a real classic.
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We must be on the same wavelength, Jim!
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