Written for Six Sentence Story where we are
challenged to incorporate the prompt word “move”
into a story of exactly six sentences. Here’s my six.
He looked real good so I made my move and walked right up to him, kissing him long and hard on the lips. He pulled me close, groaning as his hands slid up my dress and I could tell he was more than happy to see me, if you get my drift.
“Listen, baby”, he said sotto voce, “I had a nice gig dealing at a casino up in Buffalo and I made some serious moola running a fool-proof scam; I’m dealing here tonight so if you and me were to double up, we could make a killing.”
It sounded dangerous and exciting. I nibbled his ear and reached between his legs, giving him an approving squeeze, and whispered “I’m in”.
“Work first, then I’ll show you how much I missed you” he promised as I knocked on the door; the peephole opened and immediately slid closed, then the door cracked an inch and we were quickly ushered into a back room heavy with the scent of leather, cigars and money.
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It sounded dangerous and exciting, but I loved the fun. An intriguing story, Nancy!
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This noir type of writing may be my favorite; there’s lot’s of room for fun.
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Yes, now I’m familiar with your style of writing. Truly enjoyed!
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nothin’ better’n a noir couple with time on their hands!
fun, yo.
I can smell the Chesterfields from here
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Chesterfields, for sure!
This just might be my fave genre; the dialogue is so campy.
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That was great, Nancy. Double trouble, again, I expect!
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With these two, nothing but trouble! Thanks, Chris!
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Dangerous chemistry between those two….
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Like bad magnets
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One thing I’ve learned, when you are looking for trouble and finding it, don’t expect to beat the odds and win more than once.
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One thing I found …. people like these two usually do not thing with their brains.
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Those two are trouble with a capital T, Nancy!
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Nothing but, Denise!
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Bonnie and Clyde, step aside! Fabulous flash, Nancy, with an Italian interjection. 👏🏻
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Grazie, cara! This was a fun write; I’m pleased to know you enjoyed it.
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Siete i benvenuti!
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It’s like a teaser for a movie! I likey, a lot!
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So glad you likey! That’s the idea, Keith!
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And then you stopped? Right there? NOOOOOOOOOO!
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HEHEHEHEHEHE!! The art of the tease.
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Well described tale. I hope they don’t get into too much trouble, but that might not be possible give this introduction to them.
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These two live for excitement, trouble and danger. Thanks for a great comment, Frank.
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Great dialogue, and I even learned a new phrase “sotto voce“. 😄
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Aha! Excellent!
Thanks!
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A long, profitable, and mutually filling night is in store for the two of them. Sweet!
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These two are made for each other. Thanks, Fan.
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“Work first…” but why lol…🙃
dark dangerous and delightful, Nancy….
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A girl after my own heart! LOL!
Thanks so much, Destiny 😀
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🤭😂
lol…pleasure 🤍
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Fun!
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Oh, I’m pleased you think so, Allen!
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My mother, though, advised me to avoid “rough” girls.
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