Written for The Unicorn Challenge, where we are asked
to write something creative in 250 words or less
by using the photo below for inspiration.
This is my story.
The moment we stepped out of our car, the temperature felt like it dropped twenty degrees and a cold wind whipped my black-stockinged legs. We cringed at the frigid slap in the face and huddled deeper into our jackets as we climbed the steps to the church.
We found the seats reserved for us âŠ. second pew directly off the center aisle. I clutched my husbandâs hand and felt his body quiver as he raggedly exhaled, desperately trying not to cry. The tears would come, but on his terms.
The pews on both sides of the church were filled with people celebrating a life and mourning a loss. Everything leading to this moment had been a maelstrom of emotions; there are very few things that shake us to our core like a sudden death.
A man appeared at our pew; I recognized him as the manager of the funeral home. He spoke softly to my husband and together they started to walk to the back of the church. I looked up at my husbandâs face and he gave me a sad smile.
There was a heavy silence in the church, mourners sitting side-by-side lost in a fog of grief. Had someone played us the cruelest joke?
As one, the pallbearers heaved the casket onto their shoulders and the organ began to play. That’s when I saw my husband walking behind his brotherâs coffin, our widowed sister-in-law on his arm, and there were tears.
Now we will try to move forward.
NAR©2024
250 Words
This is Al Green with âHow Can You Mend A Broken Heartâ
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This brought tears to my eyes, beautifully expressed. â€
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Oh, thank you Sweets. It was a rough day, for sure.
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â€ïžâđ©č I feel your pain in this story. Prayers for you and your family in the days ahead.
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Thank you, Manette. Prayers are always much appreciated.
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A heart touching piece, Nancy! I can understand your grief. May God give you strength and peace đđ
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Your words of comfort are so very appreciated, KK.
Thank you. We are doing well and always have each other for support.
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You’re welcome, Nancy!
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Wonderfully expressed story. Great song to accompany. Brings a tear to my eyes.
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Thank you, Dylan. Writing was my outlet through all this sorrow. Now we will move forward one step at a time.
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Writing is healing….
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Beautiful. Tears ‘on his terms’ – it has to be so. Al Green’s version of the song is a really moving one. I hadn’t heard it before. There’s comfort in sad songs. Hang in there – one step at a time.
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Thank you, dear Margaret. My Bill is not one to wear his heart on his sleeve. This is the steepest climb for him and I’m right there to hold his hand. He’s doing well.
I only knew the Bee Gees version of this song. As I told my friend Dorothy, this Al Green number was one of those gifts in grief. When that organ kicked in, it was like being in church.
We are hanging in and moving forward, thank you.
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A touching eulogy, Nancy
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Most appreciative, CE.
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Thank you, Di. âĄ
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on Nancy, this is so sad. I’m sending you courage and prayers to you and your husband. Beautiful music ushering the way loving and grieving. hugs and loveđ€đđđč
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Thank you, Cindy. It’s really been a terribly sad time for us and I’m so grateful to be able to share my feelings with my friends on WordPress who have been very comforting and understanding. âĄ
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finally you can meet griefand moving forward in your own time. All the rituals are over now…. I hope the probate goes smoothly.
Godbless you all. đđđ
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Thank you, Willow, and all my friends for sharing in my grief and offering so much support and understanding. Yes, now we will move forward. âĄ
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together, and as I couldn’tâcoment on Halsyan days your sister in law will always be just that đđđđ
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Keep writing about the process, Nancy. It helps you to move on and is a great resource for your future writing, even if you don’t see that now.
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Thank you, Doug, and I will do that in my personal journal. I think my gracious readers have been more than patient and understanding; for them, it’s now time to move on.
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Oh my N., the song is so perfect, so deeply profound. Tears as I write.
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That song truly was a gift in grief, D. I was only familiar with the Bee Gees version; when I heard Al Green singing with that organ in the background, that was it for me.
We’re going to church!
Thank you, my friend. âĄ
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I imagine that putting your feelings into words has been a cathartic experience for you both. Our thoughts have been with you and will continue to be so as you face the future.
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It has, Keith. Very much so. Now it’s time to move forward.
Thank you, as always.
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A beautiful piece, Nancy. I hope your writing is giving you strength in your loss đ
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Writing has been a tremendous outlet for me as well as for Bill. It has helped us grieve in a way I never experienced before. I am so grateful to my friends, my readers, for their patient understanding. I am amazed at the outpouring of sympathy and comfort. Now it’s time to move forward.
Thank you, dear Clive. âĄ
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I know what you mean, as I felt the same when Dad died last year. I hope you can take the strength from that support and go forwards đ
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strength to url, Nancy đčđ€đ
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Strength and time, especially for my sister-in-law.
Thanks, Destiny. đ©¶
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Oh Nancy–this had me puddling up.âThese poems “in the grieving” are a beautiful honor to him.âThe language you write with is so elegant and eloquent.âAnd the title is so apt.âSending more love and prayers.
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Thank you so much, Vee. Writing has been a great release for me during this time of grief. Now, armed with love and our good memories, we will begin to move forward.
Everyone here on WP has been most kind to me. đ©¶
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There are many fine folks among WP’s bloggers…it’s like a family for those of us who are contentedly alone.
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Beautifully expressed, Nancy.
I wish you and your family strength for the way forward.
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Thank you, Jenne, for your gracious words and good wishes.
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Hugs, David.
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A sad time for your family.
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It is. We are fortunate to have each other to lean onto.
Thank you, Sadje.
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Yes support is so important at such times.
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