Written for dVerse Poetics: Itβs Noisy In Here!
Our host, Mish, is asking us to write a poem
of any style dealing with noise. Hereβs mine.
Tag: News
No Way!
Written for Shwetaβs Saturday Six Word
Story Prompt #147 β using the word βshockβ.
Hereβs where the prompt took me.
Late Night News
Esther asks: βCan you tell a story in 28 words?β,
using these four words: dynamic, mold, spoon and video.
Yes, I think I can! Hereβs my 28 word story.
THE CALL

Out of the blue the call arrived. It was late and I was beyond tired after a day of Christmas shopping and decorating. We were tempted to let it go straight to voice mail, but Gary thought it might be important.Β
βGary? Hi, itβs Alice from the adoption agency. I hope you and Carol are sitting down! We have a baby for you! Can you come by in the morning to talk?β
Gary stood up; his face registered shock. βWhat? My God! Are you sure?” Completely convinced that something terrible had happened, I grabbed the phone from Gary. βThis is Carol Wheeler. Whoβs this, please?β
It was not bad news …. just the opposite. It was elating, magical, top-of-the-world, The Most Wonderful Time Of The Year news!
A baby in need of a home! A baby for us to love!!
βYes!! Weβll be there! Oh, Alice. Iβm so happy! Thank you so much!β I was rambling.
Dumbstruck, we stood there β¦. then pandemonium broke loose. Laughing, crying, hugging, kissing, dancing, tossing tinsel around the room like crazy people. Anytime would have been amazing but for this to be happening during the holiday season was wondrous!
We didnβt think β¦. or even care β¦. to ask βboy, girl, age, etc., etc.β? After eight years of trying to get pregnant and faced with disappointment each time, an incredibly strong and loving stranger was presenting us with the most precious gift imaginable.
βGary, do you realize in a few days we will be a family of three?β I asked breathlessly.
IN A FEW DAYS!!
All tiredness forgotten, we raced to the attic for the plastic bins of assorted baby items. There in the corner stood the bassinet; it seemed to glow in the darkness. I believe at that moment I heard angels singing. We reverently carried it down to our room. I leaned into Gary, overcome with elated exhaustion.
And then the phone rang a second time. We stared at it, afraid to answer, sure it was Alice calling to say the babyβs mom had changed her mind, there would be no happy family for us.
I reached for the phone and wearily, warily said βThis is Carol.β
βCarol, itβs Alice again. Sorry to bother you and Gary but thereβs been a development.β
I closed my eyes waiting for the words I didnβt want to hear. Not now, not at Christmastime. Alice continued talking and I felt my knees growing weak.
Stunned, crying, all I could manage was a hushed βOh, Alice! Are you absolutely sure? How could this be happening? Yes. Yes, I understand.β
I hung up the phone without even saying goodbye. I was already crying when I turned to face Gary. He held me close and whispered βShh. Itβs ok, honey. Everything will be ok. Another baby is out there waiting for us. Itβs just a matter of time.β
On tiptoes, I reached up to give my darling husband a little kiss. I murmured βI love youβ, my mouth just brushing his. I looked into his eyes and spoke, my voice breaking.
βOh, Gary. There was a mix up at the hospital and Alice was given the wrong information.β
Gary started to speak but I gently placed my fingers on his lips to quiet him. I continued.
βAlice called just now to ask how we feel about adopting twins.β
Iβm quite sure neither of us was breathing at that moment. Garyβs eyes grew wide as the realization sunk in and I let out a little laugh. Gary put up two fingers and mouthed the word βTwoβ. I nodded and replied βTwo. Twin girlsβ.
We fell to the couch, a huddle of tears and laughter and hugs. Then I heard my loveβs voice next to my ear: βI told you another baby was out there waiting for us!β
Twins! Oh, what a joyful Christmas this will be!
NAR Β© 2023
This is Mark Tremonti with “The Most Wonderful Time Of The Year”
I hope you’ll join me today
for an all new In The Groove
as I welcome in the holidays.
Stop by for some great tunes!
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