Written for Living Poetry where our host,
Bartholomew, asks us to write a poem
about shadows. Here’s my response.

They call his name before they see her face,
mistake her eyes for echoes of his own
as if she was a footnote, holding space
for someone else’s gift, out on loan.
She’s learned to speak in quieter tones,
to shrink before he enters any room,
to let him fill the air down to the bones
while she became a secondary bloom.
His light is real; she does not wish it dark….
But light, by nature, throws a shadow wide.
She has lived so very long without a spark
and learned to walk behind and not beside.
They say the shade is cool, an unassuming thing,
a place for tender roots to hold and life to grow.
But she is tired of watching him take wing;
She’s eager now to dance outside his shadow!
NAR©2026
This is “Shadow of a Man” by Lady Gaga ft. Michael Jackson
Everything on The Elephant’s Trunk was created by me, unless otherwise indicated. Thanks for your consideration. NAR©2017-present.

Brilliant verse Nance it’s now time for her to shine – great Gaga song too🙌
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I thought that Gaga song was terrific! Lovely comments. Thanks so much, Ange. ✨
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♥️
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Lovely take on my prompt. Well done! Thanks for writing.
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Thanks, Bartholomew. I appreciate your very kind comments. It’s a pleasure to participate.
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Let the sun shine in, girl!!
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Time to spread those wings! Thank you, Lois.
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I say just DO IT! So nicely done!
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Exactly! It’s the only way. Thanks so much, Jodi.
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Time for HER light to shine. Wonderful poem, Nancy! 💫
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And she’s ready for the spotlight! Thank you, Debbie.
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Don’t put Baby in a corner, because she was meant to shine.
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Excellent comment, Jim! Thanks so much.
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Amem 💜
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You got that right, Willow! Thank you.
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Very good poem. I’m all for her stepping out of his shadow
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Yes! It’s about time! Thanks you, Sadje.
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👍🏼🙏🏼👍🏼
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Oh, what a bleak and gloomy situation, Nancy …
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Yes, but she’s finding her way out! Thanks for some Augie this morning, dear Ivor. 🥰🎶
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Always my musical pleasure, Nancy 🎶🥰🌏
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step up, sister. Shadowcasters are never as substantial as they seem.
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That’s a fact, Jack!
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Very good – I like this. I like its rhythm 👏
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Thanks so very much, Lesley!
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🤗
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