Mystery, Noir, Photo Prompt, Short Story

The Debt: A Dirk Malone Story

Written for Crispina’s Crimson’s Creative
Challenge #068
. I chose Pic #2.
Here’s where the image took me
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© Crispina Kemp

The harbor light burned like a warning I should’ve heeded years ago.

I stood at the water’s edge, collar up against the salty wind, watching the waves churn between the stone piers. The envelope in my pocket felt heavier than it should …. just paper and ink, but weighted with names and places I’d never forget.

Kevin Walsh. Missing six days. Last seen boarding a fishing vessel that never left port.

The thing was, I knew Kevin. Knew his booming laugh, what beer he liked, the scar on his forehead from a broken bottle in a dive bar on Clinton Street. We’d been partners once, back when I still carried a badge and believed in justice.

That red harbor light cast its glow across the dark water, and I thought about all the things that get lost at sea …. secrets, bodies, the better versions of ourselves. The harbormaster said the boat’s captain had disappeared, too. Convenient. Too convenient. It stinks like week-old garbage.

My reflection wavered in the oily water below. Somewhere behind me, footsteps scraped on concrete, then stopped. Watching. Waiting.

I’d taken this case knowing it would drag me back into the darkness …. a darkness Kevin pulled me from eight long years ago. A situation that should’ve killed me.

The wind picked up, carrying voices from the fishing boats …. or maybe just ghosts.

I turned from the water, pulled my fedora low, and walked toward those waiting footsteps.

Some debts you pay, no matter the cost.

NAR©2026

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26 thoughts on “The Debt: A Dirk Malone Story”

  1. That a pretty cool one Nancy 😀 “Too convenient. It stinks like week-old garbage.” are great lines and I love “The wind picked up, carrying voices from the fishing boats …. or maybe just ghosts.”

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