Written for MLMM Monday Wordle #458.
Our twelve prompt words are shown below.
Here’s where they took me. Thanks, Di!
chapter, clear, cup, drama, felt, fifty, message,
muted, precious, sparkler, watched, and wiped
She watched him approach with champagne and a sparkler fizzing in a tin cup . Fifty felt different than she’d imagined …. more precious, somehow. Muted Patsy Cline in the background, the well-placed birthday decorations, all spoke of love.
“LouAnn, we need to talk.” He wiped his palms on his jeans.
Her heart raced. This was it, the proposal she’d been expecting.
“I got a message today. From Dixie.” He paused. “She’s back in town.”
The sparkler died with a hiss.
“I thought I was ready to start a new chapter with you, but…..” His eyes were clear and sincere. She wasn’t surprised by his next words.
“I’m not over her. I’m sorry.”
The champagne tasted bitter. Three years of hoping dissolved in seconds.
“Thank you,” she heard herself say, “for not proposing when you weren’t sure.”
As he left, she felt something more than sadness; she felt relief. Better this drama now than a lifetime of being second choice.
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This is “She’s Got You” by Patsy Cline
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The Elephant's Trunk 
I fall in love every time I hear her sing…
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Isn’t that a fabulous reaction? Thanks, John.
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I am glad she realized what a gift she had been given.
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I agree. When you marry for the wrong reasons, it’s nothing but heartache. Thanks, Jodi
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Very well done my dear!
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Thank you, my dear D!
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Good piece Nancy. Nothing worse than being second best and she deserves better. At least he was honest though. A lot of men aren’t. Thanks for taking part.
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My pleasure, Di. I’m really enjoying these Wordles. Thanks for a spot on comment.
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I didn’t want to see this one fold so volunteered to host it. I’ve done over a hundred now and clocked up over 1000 likes!!
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Three years?! Don’t let the door hit you on the way out, buddy.
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He must’ve been doing something right!
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Being on the back burner never cooks the pudding properly …
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Hahaha! That gave me a great big laugh! Thanks so much for an excellent video and a very funny comment, dear Ivor. 🥰 🎶 😆
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A silly little anecdote that I made up 📖 and a song from that “guy” Sivert Hoyem 🎶💕
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Perfect song to go with your writing
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Thanks so much, Keith. I really try my best to provide a good soundtrack; this was an no-brainer.
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You wouldn’t know you had to use the prompt words Nancy – great piece of writing 🙌
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Wow! That’s a fabulous comment and compliment. Thank you so much, Ange. 💕
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It is very true Nancy 💞
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This is very good Nancy.
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Thank you very much, Sadje. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re always most welcome
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Aways better to be a too-sooner than a “I knew it, DAMMIT”
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Hahaha! Good one, Ron
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She is so right, you have to be number 1. Great song go go with fab words 😀
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There’s really no other way that works. Thanks, Brian; so pleased you like this one. ☺️
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