Written for Sunday Whirl Wordle – #734. Our host is
Brenda Warren and these are our prompt words: rinse,
days, still, thicket, bomb, fake, criminal, foster, imagine,
lies, sky, and sink. Here’s where the prompts took me.

The dame walked into my office like trouble in heels. I could spot her type from three blocks away in a fog thicket. She had the kind of face that made you imagine all sorts of scenarios, most of them ending with a body in the harbor.
“Mr. Malone, I need you to find my husband, Victor Foster. He’s been missing for three days.”
Three days. In my line of work, that’s either nothing or everything. “Police involved?”
“They think he ran off with his secretary. That’s a lie.”
“Everyone lies, sweetheart. It’s the family business of the human race.” I stubbed out my cigarette. “What makes you so sure it’s fake?”
Her eyes went hard as diamonds. “Because Victor is a criminal, Mr. Malone. And when criminals disappear, it’s rarely voluntary.”
The dame had an excellent point. I quoted her my rate …. double, because this had ‘bomb’ written all over it …. and she didn’t even blink. I should have gone for triple.
The trail led me to the docks, where the sky hung low and gray. Foster had been laundering money, skimming from both the mob and his business partners. I found him in a warehouse, still breathing but not by much. Two goons had him tied to a chair.
What happened next involved my .38 and enough gunfire to wake the dead. When the smoke cleared, I had Foster and a new hole in my favorite hat.
Back at my office, Victor Foster coughed up the truth. His wife was behind everything. She was the one who set him up and hired me to make it look legit. By now, she’d be on a plane to Rio with his offshore accounts cleaned out …. no way to rinse that money clean.
I should’ve seen it coming. I let Foster go and poured another drink. Just another case where the only thing deeper than the lies is the ocean they all eventually sink into.
I knew that dame was trouble.
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This is “Lie To Me” by Brook Benton
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Noir at its finest! Great writing, Nancy.
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So glad you enjoyed Dirk Malone! Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment.
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Excellent noir detective story ❤️❤️
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This is probably my favorite writing genre. I have so much fun getting into character. Thank you, Lisa!
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Great news to me, because I love reading them ❤️
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That was very good story telling. You had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Bravo!!
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Thanks very much, Mark. I appreciate your excellent comments.
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Enjoyment personified, Nancy, … you can see, as lois said, Bogey/Bacall, sitting opposite each other, staccato words bouncing back and forth, … you’re fantastic my friend, at bringing the storyline to life, …( or near death, in Victor Fosters case! 😉) …💙
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Hahaha! Great comment about Victor Foster! Thanks so much, dear Penn, for all the lovely things you said. I’m delighted to know you enjoyed another adventure with Dirk Malone!
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✨💙🤗✨
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Did not see that ending coming at all! And doesn’t this have Bogey and Bacall written all over it? “The dame…” Perfect!
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Thanks so much, Lois. This is probably my favorite genre; it’s so much fun getting into character. I really enjoy writing these stories and sharing them with my readers. Thanks for a great comment; so glad you enjoyed the story.
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You are really good at this, Nancy. He should have insisted on getting paid in advance.
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Thanks very much, Jim; I really do enjoy writing these stories. I’m sure he got paid; what he should have done was ask for triple!
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I really enjoyed this!
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Thanks so much, Kymber. It’s so great to hear from you! Very glad you liked my story.
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That’s why we call gangster’s women Moll’s (mauls) This was so good!
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You’re so right about that! Thanks very much, Jodi.
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Excellent story telling, Nancy!
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Thank you for a very kind and gracious comment, Eugi. I’m very appreciative.
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You’re most welcome, Nancy.
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Another delicious story Noir ! 💜💜💜
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Oh, thanks Sis! So glad you enjoyed this one.
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It was so good 💯
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“Subtle Shuffles”
Double trouble
Knuckled and scuttled
Burgled and gurgled
Like smoking ‘hubble-bubble’
Everything is befuddled and muddled
Then juggled and smuggled
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Yep! You got that right, dear Ivor. 🥰 😊
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Well cone Nancy with a good twist 😀
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Thanks so very much, Brian. I’m delighted to know you enjoyed my story.
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Another excellent noir tale, Nancy!
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Thanks, Fan. And right back at ya! 😎
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