Written for Only Murders In My Mind
Weekly Writing Prompt #80 and the
photo prompt shown below.
Here’s where the image took me.

Seemingly engrossed in her copy of Le Monde, the tres chic young woman on the train had an air of aloof mystery about her. She scanned the pages with sharp, focused intensity, paying no heed to the passengers who stole curious glances, wondering about the contents of the briefcase that sat by her side. Some whispered speculations about her being a spy while others imagined she was a courier for a foreign diplomat; no doubt they all admired her modern and attractive appearance.
Her fellow passengers might be surprised to learn the young woman was not just a spy; she was, in fact, the bureau’s highest ranking double-o agent on a crucial mission. The newspaper was a clever disguise, hiding coded messages that only she could decipher. The briefcase contained top-secret documents that could change the course of international relations.
Without warning, the train screeched to a stop inside a tunnel, causing a commotion among the passengers. The young woman remained calm, her hand reaching for the briefcase with practiced ease. Just then the lights went out; the inside of the train was in total darkness. After a few tense moments, the lights were restored and everyone sighed in relief. However, that relief turned into exclamations of bewilderment when the people realized the attractive young woman was nowhere in sight.
Where could she have gone? Was she still on the train or did she and her briefcase make a surreptitious exit into the darkness? Everyone had their suspicions but no one could say for sure.
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Nice one, Nancy!!
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Thanks very much, Lisa! I’m pleased to know you enjoyed my story.
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Nice!!!!!
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Thanks very much, Di.
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I think the tres chic young woman knew there would be a border check at the next stop, so she bailed out just in time.
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You may be on to something, Kemosabe.
Thanks, Jim.
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If I am Kemosabe, does that make you the Lone Ranger.
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No, you’re the Lone Ranger and I’m Tonto. Tonto called the Lone Ranger Kemosabe.
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Love this, Nancy! I like a who what where when tale!
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Me too! Thanks very much, dear Keith.
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Brilliant!
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Thanks very much, Jodi!
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Oh, the many possibilities. Was she drinking Harriman’s Herbal Tea perhaps?
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Very good, Mrs Hitchcock!
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Somehow, I knew you’d get the reference!
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Oh, I love a good mystery! Well done, Nancy.
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Me too, Eugi! Thanks very much!
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My pleasure, Nancy.
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And the lady , vanished! 💜
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Now that was a good movie!
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Amen
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Cool story
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Thank you, Sadje. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re very welcome dear friend
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Yes, you and I were definitely on the same track (no pun intended) with our stories. I really enjoyed your take, Nancy.
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Yes, we were! Thanks very much, Fan.
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Spy mysteries are always thrilling and entertaining, Nancy … because she calmly grabbed her briefcase, I’d say she knew about a secret rendezvous in the tunnel when the lights when out …
https://youtu.be/PYh2Srt3Hvs
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I’m with you, dear Ivor! She is, after all, a super sleuth!
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I like “super sleuth” 😄
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Great bit of flash fiction Nancy – I enjoyed the song although I’d not heard of them, their sound reminds me of Talking Heads 😀
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Thank you, Ange. Yes, I can hear a bit of Talking Heads. You may be more familiar with their better-known song, “Mexican Radio”. Wall Of Voodoo didn’t last very long.
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Yes I know of that one😀
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