Written for Esther’s Writing Prompts #83
incorporating the word “promises”.
Here’s where the prompt led me.

Do you remember playground days
when dreams were never-ending?
Swings soared ever higher,
wind in our hair, sun on our cheeks.
We pushed each other to the clouds,
a pinky-sworn “forevermore”.
Our giggles, a promise
floating on the breeze,
as vast and endless as the sky above.
Now the swing hangs still.
Dust settles on the worn-down seat.
No laughter cuts the quiet air,
only the rust sings a lonely tune.
That “always” we once promised,
a whisper the wind no longer keeps.
The playground sleeps,
and our forever is just a memory,
a faded promise on an empty swing.
NAR©2025
This is “This Used To Be My Playground” by Madonna
All text and graphics are copyright for Nancy Richy and are not to be used without permission. NAR©2017-present.

A very moving poem my friend
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Grazie, cara mia.
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♥️💕♥️
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One of my favourite Madonna tracks Nancy.Just read you reply to Jim and hope all goes well regardng your hand on Monday.
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Thanks for your very good wishes, Di, and for your comments about Madonna’s song. It is really quite nice, isn’t it.
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You’re welcome. I also like You’ll See.
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Another one for me to check out.
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🙂
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Love this, Nancy. So moving and having spent time at my elementary school yesterday, a tender connection for me. 💛
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A bit of serendipity! I love when that happens, Michele. Thanks for a delightful comment. ☺️
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I remember those days fondly. I wished my carefree days would never end. Dreamy piece, Nancy.
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Yes, I know that feeling, too. Thanks, Eugi.
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You’re welcome, Nancy.
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Playgrounds usually deteriorate over time due to a combination of heavy use, harsh weather, and material degradation, as sun exposure, extreme temperatures, humidity, and constant foot traffic all contribute to fading, cracking, rust, and general wear and tear, necessitating upkeep and eventual replacement.
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Sounds a lot like the human body. Thanks, Jim.
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Lots of similarities. How did your hand MRI turn out?
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My appointment is this coming Monday. I’m very curious about what decision will be made concerning the lump which continues to cause me discomfort. Thanks for asking, Jim.
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That’s why we have grandchildren, I think: to renew that sense of vitality and wonder…and hope. 🦋🦋
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Is that why? I thought it was to shovel snow and install apps on my phone! 😂
As grandparents, we need to let our grandchildren be kids for as long as they can; for me, that means being a kid with them.
Thanks, Liz.
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Keep playing! It keeps us young and worries our children…😉😄
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Tenderly rendered memories, Nancy/
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Sweet childhood days are gone far too soon. Thank you, Jodi.
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What a dreamy piece of memories remembered and such nostalgia! 🩷
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Thanks, Cindy. The song was a great inspiration for me.
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You’re so very welcome. Yes, indeed!!! 💕
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Nice story, Nancy. And, yes, the days of using the swing are long over, even when I think about my now-23-year-old son’s playground days. BTW, I’ve always liked that Madonna song!
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Thanks very much, Christian. I just became aware of that song the other day!
Recently we took our granddaughter to the park and I rode the swings with her. What a great feeling of freedom! I highly recommend it! 🥳
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Perhaps I should give it a try as well to get my mind off stuff. Music is a perfect for that as well…
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Love this Nancy! As long as we remember it, it will always be there!
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Excellent comment, Tiffany! So much of our life is spent being adults; it’s important to let children be children for as long as possible. What’s the rush?
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I love your touching lines and the song, I don’t think I’ve listened to this before. Growing up, we leave so much behind.
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This song was playing on SiriusXM the other day; I wasn’t familiar with it but it was like a gift to go with my poem. Serendipity!
Isn’t it incredible how fleeting childhood really is? So many kids grow up too fast; once those days are gone, they’re gone forever. Thanks for a lovely comment, Lisa.
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Ah, beautiful, sister!
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Thanks, luv! ☺️
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Love this
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Thank you! So pleased to know you enjoyed your read today. Thanks for stopping by.
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This is so poignant and you capture the feelings of childhood so well. The perfect song to go with this ❤️
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Thanks very much, Esther. This song was playing on SiriusXM the other day; I wasn’t familiar with it but thought it would make a good soundtrack for your challenge. I’m pleased to know you enjoyed my poem.
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Great answer Nancy, a thoughtful reflection of the past.
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Thank you, Ernie. Childhood is so fleeting, isn’t it?
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It was so long ago…
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Oh yes, Nancy, … beautiful writing , ….we thought childhood would last forever, …💙
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That’s the way it should be for kids. They have the rest of their lives to be grown ups! Thank you, dear Penn.
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