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Lover, Come Back!

Sammi asks us to be creative with the word
“umbrella” in exactly 24 words while Gerry &
Sue
want us to include the word “burgeoning”.
Maybe this timely image from Mike at OMIMM
will inspire me. Here’s where my thoughts went.

Image from Mike @ OMIMM

Where has my lover gone? If only he’d come back to share my umbrella, that dark, burgeoning raincloud over my head wouldn’t even matter.

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24 Words

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21 thoughts on “Lover, Come Back!”

  1. How beautiful how you turn a simple umbrella into a symbol of shelter and companionship. One feels the absence, the weight of the cloud, and at the same time, the tenderness of the desire to share that shelter. In just a few words, you manage to convey a mixture of nostalgia and hope that touches the heart.

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