Written for Esther’s “Can You Tell A Story In…..?
#296” – exactly 57 words using the six required
prompts: ‘gag’, ‘climb’, ‘thriller’, ‘fussy’, ‘scorpio’
and ‘tombola’. Here’s where my thoughts went.
“Signore Scorpio! What an honor! Climb into the gondola, sir. Where are you headed this fine evening, signore?”
“Stop chattering! You’re too fussy! Take me to the tombola bar! Pronto!”
“Yes, sir! Right away, signore! The game is going to be a real thriller!”
“Just row, stupido, before I gag you and toss you into the canal!”
NAR©2025
57 Words
Nancy’s Notes: The wonderful Connie Francis passed away July 16. This is in honor of Connie. May she rest peacefully.
This is “Comm’e Bella A Stagione” by Connie Francis
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The Elephant's Trunk 
I love the old guy’s attitude!
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please, I know that person, sweet.
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Many of us do. Thanks, Dylan.
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yes i believe they are everywhere
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Short tempered dandy. Love the writing 👏🏽
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Thanks very much, Selma!
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What a grumpy old man 😂
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He really is! Hope his disposition improves at the games!
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Very interesting take Nancy
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Thanks, Sadje; these are very interesting words!
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You’re welcome my friend
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Ah … the lovely Connie Francis, a great accompaniment to your witty verse, Nancy … 🎵📃💕
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Yes, I was saddened to learn of Connie’s passing on Wednesday; she was a staple in my childhood home. Thanks very much, dear Ivor! 🥰
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You’re most welcome, Nancy … 💕
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