Written for Kevinās No Theme Thursday 10.31.24.
Weāre offered incredibly creative images to inspire
and get our writing juices flowing. This is my story.

He knew time was running out. One stupid slip up and now the screws were on to him. He could feel the walls closing in. All his usual haunts were being watched; there was no safe place for him to lie low. Where to go? What to do? His back was up against the wall ā¦. an unfamiliar and uncomfortable position for him.
He managed to get word to his mother ā¦. the only person in the world he knew would never turn him in to the coppers. She knew about the girls, about her sonās depravity, his love of knives, his proclivity for āplaying roughā, where the bodies were buried. It was a terrible sickness ā¦. he couldnāt help himself ā¦. and she would protect him at all costs, her sonny boy. Ā
āMum, I screwed up. Big time! Iām skipping town and I donāt know when Iāll be back. Sorry, mum. I love you. Paul.ā
Desperate men do desperate things. He hopped on a freight train with nothing but the clothes on his back, a photo of his mother in his breast pocket and a pack of smokes.
And he started plotting and scheming.
He was feeling cold and tired when he noticed the train starting to slow down. Spying the dim headlights of an Army jeep through the slats of the boxcar, he knew it was time. He jumped off the moving train and looked around in the darkness. Sprinting across the tracks to the other side, he spotted a lone soldier taking a leak a few yards from his jeep. Luck was on his side.
With the ease of a someone who had killed before, he stuck his knife deep into the back of the soldierās neck and gave a twist. Swiftly and silently he dragged the body to a wooded area, stripping it naked; he quickly donned the army uniform, then dressed the dead soldier in his clothes. Curious as to his new identity, he glanced at the dog tags before slipping them around his neck: Sgt. Matthew Connors. Slinging the sergeantās gun over his shoulder, he ran back to the jeep and drove off into the night.
The dead soldier would be found soon enough, with a photo in his jacket pocket. Heād figure out a way to alert his mother; sheād be worried about her sonny boy.
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This is āBack To The Wallā by Steve Earle
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The picture took you to a dark place. A sorrowful story indeed.
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Isn’t it amazing how we are transported to another time and place by these amazing graphics? I don’t think I will ever grow tired of writing these prompt stories.
Thank you for reading and commenting, Keith.
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Good stuff. Keep em coming.
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Hey, thanks Phil! That’s the plan.
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Good story Nancy.
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Thanks so much, Di!
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Well, that’s just about the last place my mind went when looking at the image. Great job N.!
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Yay! That’s exactly what I was hoping for, D! Thank you.
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I have to repeat Sadje G’s words…” a master storyteller” indeed….š¤
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You are so very kind, Destiny. I am truly humbled.
Great graphics get the imagination going!
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Wow! That’s a spine tingle. Wasn’t sure how you’d get to the photo, but you made in unexpected twists!
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Thanks so much, Liz! I’m loving these new images from No Theme Thursday; they’re excellent!
Good to know I tingled your spine today! š
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A mother’s love for her son has no limits, even if he is a piece of trash.
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Right you are! I’ve seen enough Jimmy Cagney movies to know that much!
Thanks, Jim.
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Top of the world, Ma!
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A dark tale, and I like the way you worked the song title into it – a good segue!
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Thanks, Clive! It’s dark alright; sometimes I wonder where my thoughts come from! These graphics are incredible. š³
For me, finding the right music for a story is like putting on that last piece of jewelry before a big night out. It can make or break an outfit and needs to be perfect. I’m glad you enjoyed today’s song. š
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I donāt have such a vivid imagination! The song was a good fit and it was Steve Earle, who is always fine for me š
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I have enough imagination for the both of us! š¤£
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Just as well! š¤£
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A very dark tale, Nancy.
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That it is, Fan. I hope you enjoyed it.
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I did indeed.
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Thanks, Fan!
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Desperate times and desperate measures indeed. I wonder how long his luck will last!
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Who knows with guys like him? Some seem to have a streak of “good luck” and never get caught. I hope my MC gets killed in combat and is identified as the poor soldier he so brutally murdered. That would be poetic justice!
Thanks for your comments, Shweta!
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Indeed, Nancy. Oh, that would be poetic justice indeed! You’re most welcome, Nancy
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what a nasty piece of work this guy is Nancy. A beautifully crafted piece here šš
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It takes all kinds, Willow.
Sometimes I don’t know where my thoughts come from but I’m very grateful for them. Thanks so much! š©¶š©¶
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A pleasure š
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This is a very sad story
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Yes, it is, Sadje. The prompt graphics are so well done, they bring out many emotions.
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Youāre a master storyteller so you write your stories very well
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š§” Thank you, sincerely.
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Itās my pleasure
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Apparently, there was more than one enemy in those woods. Very well crafted, Nancy! ššš
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Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? (I wonder if you remember that great old line)
Thank you for your very kind comments. It’s the beauty and detail of your images that spark the imagination, Kevin. Very happy to have found a niche here at NTT!
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I have heard it, but I will be damned if I can remember where from. I am also not going to cheat and Google it š
I am very glad to hear you say that, Nancy. I am very grateful that you found us as well. Thank you š
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It’s from the old radio show, The Shadow … before my time but I remember my parents talking about it.
There are sooo many prompts on WP; it’s a matter of finding the ones that work. This works for me. Thanks! š
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