Written for Moonwashed Weekly Prompt (“hope for”)
and Weekly Prompts Wednesday Challenge (“impatience).
Here is my Dectina Refrain followed by a Haiku.
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Fret,
Worry,
Useless fears
Swirl in our brains
Dance of impatience
When all we should hope for
Is a peaceful mind and heart
Every day is its own journey
Our destination is preordained
Fret, worry, useless fears swirl in our brains
The journey is short
No time for useless worry
Be still, let in calm
NAR©2024
Dectina Refrain:
This refrain is written as follows:
1st line – 1 syllable, 2nd line – 2 syllables
3rd line – 3 syllables, and so on for 9 lines;
the 10th line is comprised of the first four lines
as one stand-alone line.
This is the extraordinary “Bridge Over Troubled Water” by Simon and Garfunkel
All text, graphics and videos are copyright for The Sicilian Storyteller, The Elephant’s Trunk and The Rhythm Section and are not to be used without permission. NAR©2017-present.
oh yes. Best to worry less.
“I worried a lot… Finally I saw that worrying had come to nothing.
And I gave it up. And took my old body
and went out into the morning,
and sang.
by Mary Oliver”
your poem and lovely form made me think of the above. Love your words. Thanks.
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My pleasure, Selma! Thanks for sharing Mary Oliver’s poem with me.
I wish it were that easy to stop worrying – don’t you?!
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Not easy for sure, but necessary for finding beauty that still exists. And hope sparks garner more hope. (I hope)
Blessings on your day or night.
(It’s day 18th for me) ☔️
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☀️
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So beautiful poem, Nancy! Love the format.
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I’m glad you enjoyed the format, KK. This is one of my favorite styles of poetry to write. I appreciate your comments today.
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That’s really great, Nancy. You’re welcome!
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Beautifully written piece, Nancy.
“Every storm runs out of rain.” ― Maya Angelou
I just wish it will happen soon. 💗
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Oh goodness, Eugi. Me too!
Thanks so much. 🩶
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You’re welcome, Nancy.
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It is difficult to watch our elders with dementia try and navigate their new days with patience when they remember passed freedoms…
Your verse though is appilicable to every stage of living. May we all stress less and live as best we can, more.
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Yes, it is very difficult. I see my sister going through it with her husband.
Thank you for your very gracious thoughts, Jules.
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A most difficult choice – Another gent I knew, had to make the choice to put his spouse in full care of others (she had developed her dementia too early) so he could continue to be there for his children…
Sometimes elders do not make easy choices to live far from those who could help, making communication harder (with all involved, those providing close care and those having to make the long distance choces and those who can see what should be done, but have no say at all…).
Then there are others who like a neighbor I had – had no children and chose to have a stranger make the needed choices…
All the best. It is not an easy road for the one cared for, the caregiver and those others who have to ‘watch’.
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Troubled waters always settle…sweet
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Thanks, Dylan.
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😊😉
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Lovely.
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Thank you, Iris.
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Very lovely N.! And one of my favorite songs from back in the day!
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Thanks, D! That song should be played globally on giant loudspeakers at least once a day.
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Absolutely!
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Beautiful Nance, I love this! It spoke to me this morning! X
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Thank you, CA! Good morning to you.
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