Written for Friday Fictioneers where our gracious host, Rochelle,
encourages us to get creative in 100 words or less using this photo
as our inspiration. Here is my 100-word photo-inspired story.
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Funny thing about dreams and memories; sometimes it’s difficult to tell them apart. Sometimes I just don’t want to.
That summer …. after the breakup …. I needed to be alone …. to think …. to put the hurt behind me. A few days at that motel on the beach seemed like a good idea at the time.
Everywhere I walked …. everything I saw …. reminded me of you. The scent of salt water. Scattered shells and seaweed. That song. Hot summer nights. Stars so close you could touch them.
Memories and dreams of you …. they’re funny that way.
NAR©2024
100 Words
This is “In Dreams” by Roy Orbison
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Touching story.
At the end we have memories & our loved ones thankfully visit our dreams. It looks so real that we can touch them and feel it is all so true.
Have experienced this after my mother passed away. Even today, I feel she is here…
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Of course you do. Your mom is always with you in some way or another.
Thank you for your lovely comments, Anita.
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Memory and dreams. Indeed magical and when we don’t want themto be, horribly memorable. A sad piece beautifully done
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You got that right, Laurie. Thanks!
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Dear Nancy,
There are some dreams and memories we don’t want to let go of. Nicely written, evocative piece.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Very true, Rochelle. We cling to them to keep from drowning.
Thank you for your lovely comments.
Shalom
🕊️
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There’s no escaping…they lie in wait and pounce when we least expect them ….memories. Lovely story.
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A perfect word …. pounce.
Thanks for your wonderful comment, Joy.
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Lovely story, Nancy and it rings so true.
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So nice to know that! Thanks, R.M.
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I can feel the pain, the difficulty of letting go…
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It’s never easy if we’re unable or unwilling to let it be.
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Beautiful writing and her emotions come through loud and clear.
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Thank you, GH. I’m delighted to know that!
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Dreaming…
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and day dreaming
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Grief takes time to pass, and I think she’s not ready to release it to move on. Beautiful writing!
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by the way, it’s Brenda and not anonymous. 😊
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Thanks so much, Brenda!
You’re right, of course. She’ll hold onto the memories until she gives herself permission to let go.
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This is lovely and I could really relate.
Enjoyable read.
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Thanks so much, Dawn. I love knowing that!
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The memories and dreams are where she wants to be, I think. She’s not ready to let go, move on, yet. Beautifully drawn picture of her heartbreak and how she has to live in it, remembering the good times, until they loosen their hold on her. Lovely song.
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You got it, Margaret. The binds won’t loosen until she gives them permission. I think, for now, she’s comfortable with her dreams and memories.
Insightful comments as always. Thank you!
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Good writing, Nancy, and great song choice. I love Roy’s music and this is one of my favorites by him.
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Thanks, Lisa, for all you very kind comments.
One of my favorite songs by Roy as well.
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You’re very welcome.
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Keep those dreams and memories alive Nancy
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Always, Glyn!
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A beautiful story Nance! It really moved me! X
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Oh, how lovely, CA! Thank you! X
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Such sweet melancholy!
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Sweet melancholy is an irresistible combination for me! 😌
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Nicely woven 😊
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Thanks so much, Sanjeet!
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Beautifully done, Nancy. That “sometimes I don’t want to” says so much.
I have never been one to pine after a breakup. Mind you, doesn’t mean certain songs, things, etc. don’t remind me of them 😉
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That line set the stage; I’m glad I thought of it. 😁
Considering I met Bill at age 17, I haven’t experienced too many romantic breakups …. except, of course, for little Stevie Tallarico and my Kookie-lookalike!! 😉
So many songs, so many memories. 🎶🎶🎶
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Oh my gosh. Since 17! That’s a beautiful thing as you are still in love.
I’ve had a few. Cried a little. Moved on. I figure I’m heartless. 😏
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What are you supposed to do? Commit harakiri? Join a convent? It’s not heartless; it’s pragmatic.
Monday we will celebrate our 52nd wedding anniversary. It was meant to be.
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Hahahaha! Something tells me if we sat down with a drink, we’d have LOADS to chat about!
That is such a beautiful thing, Nancy. I am so happy for you both. Mick and I would have been together 29 years this month. Wow…. you’ve just reminded me 💞
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Something tells me I didn’t really have to remind you. A love like that stays with you forever. ♾️ ♡
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That’s for sure. 💞
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I love that reflection on memory
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Thank you kindly, Neil!
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Wonderful story, Nancy.💕
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Thanks so much, Grace! 🩶
I see a hot summer romance novel in my near future. 😂😎
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Absolutely 💕
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Always my pleasure Nancy 🎶😎😊😍📖
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Such a lovely and sad story N., and a perfect dreamy song to accompany.
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Thanks, D! I fell in love with that video as soon as I saw it. What a lovely ambiance for such a poignant song.
Thanks, my friend. 😌
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❤️
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😘
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A very moving story
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Thank you, Sadje. I’m glad you thought so.
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💕
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beautiful, Nancy …🤍
“Sometimes I just don’t want to”
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Thank you, Destiny.
You saw it! That’s the pivotal line! 🩶
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hard to miss in life… 😉
pleasure always 🤍
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Sometimes I just don’t want to.
That line is the trap we set ourselves, because we can not let go of what has truly gone.
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Delighted you picked up on the line and its significance, James. That really sets the stage for my story.
Thanks for your comments.
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And the magnificent song from the big “O” explains it all so beautifully Nancy …
Dreams of The Heart
I cannot walk the continents
Like the intrepid Marco Polo
But my feet have felt the sands of time
Pass between my toes
I have not sailed the high seas
Like the courageous Christopher Columbus
But my body has bathed
In an ocean full of kind hearts
I’m yet to fly in space
Like the brave Neil Armstrong
But I have reached for the stars
And touched my soul’s dreams
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Truly, Ivor! Could I have gone with any other song? I don’t think so. Very pleased you listened and experienced the feelings I hoped to convey.
Thank you for gracing my post with a lovely poem. 😌
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