Written for Fandango’s Story Starter #148, using the first sentence teaser,
and for Six Sentence Story, using the word ‘double’. Here’s my story:
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She held out her arms to hug me, but I knew this wasnāt my house ā and she definitely wasnāt my wife but she was one of the most gorgeous women Iād ever seen and I found it difficult to resist her charms; Iāve always been a weak man ā¦. whether it was women, drugs, drinking, gambling, sex ā¦. I couldnāt control myself.
Strange sensations came over me and I felt disoriented; I was sweating but I had chills, my vision was blurry, my tongue seemed huge in my mouth …. about three times its normal size …. my head felt like it was under water and my equilibrium was off, making me stumble and lose my balance, walking into the furniture and reeling yet even though I desperately wanted this goddess standing before me, I was unable to reach her.
For no apparent reason, I suddenly remembered when I got home from work earlier that day, I found a new drink in the refrigerator ā¦. 24 mini-cans of some beverage with exotic-sounding names such as Peach Bellini, Pineapple Mule, Mango Meringue, Grapefruit Paloma, Maui Sunset ā¦. and it was totally bewildering to me that I could remember those names but not where I was, who I was, who this woman was and yet I knew for a fact that I drank a couple of those cans of delightful nectar; could be thatās what was messing with my head …. making me be so unsure about some things but entirely certain about others …. not unlike taking quaaludes (the authentic Rorer 714s, not some cheap bootleg shit), dropping acid and then popping amyl nitrate all at the same time like some who-do voodoo cocktail.
I could hear this luscious woman talking but I was unable to reach her, to press her mind-bendingly magnificent body next to mine; her words were garbled and all I could make out was the name āAlexā which was very strange because my name wasnāt Alex .ā¦ or maybe it was .ā¦ I wasnāt sure of anything except that I definitely downed several cans of exquisite ambrosia with exciting names.
Holding on to the back of the sofa to keep myself from falling, I caught a glimpse of my reflection in the mirror and I gasped; I did a doubletake because even though my vision was definitely wonky, it wasnāt so bad that I couldnāt see that I had suddenly transformed into a very attractive black man much like Michael B. Jordan when just half an hour ago I was my usual George Costanza look-alike!
Then without warning the womanās voice started morphing and began to sound familiar, kind of like my wife Alexis and when I looked up into the mirror I was no longer Michael B. Jordan ā¦. I was back to my old self, plain old Fred Johnson ā¦. and when I looked over at the woman, that voluptuous blonde with the perfect 44 double Ds had been replaced with my short, squatty wife of 37 years; well, that sucked and I quickly determined the only thing I could do was to drink more of those tasty beverages in mini-cans and pray my gorgeous fantasy girl would return but when I yanked open the door of the fridge, I was alarmed to see there was no more voodoo juice left and my heart sank because, as always, I couldnāt control my damn self, I had downed all the mini-cans of ecstasy and now it was just me and short, squatty Alexis.
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This is āI Drink Aloneā by George Thorogood and the Destroyers
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Always a good fun to read your six sentence stories, and this is not an exception. A great story, Nancy!
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Another fun one, KK. Being serious has its place but too much seriousness is not good for the soul. We need to laugh.
Thank you so much!
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I agree with you. That’s why it’s always a pleasure to read you.
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Ah, but with all that on board, would he be able to do anything with either his wife or the fantasy woman except pass out?
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Prob not but heās not thinking with his brain, Mimi!
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Mini cans of voodoo juice in the ‘fridge might come in handy from time to time, lol.
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I think they’re a must!
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This is pure fun to read, and touches perfectly on your ability to create a story out of magic.
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Lovely comment! Thank you.
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Nice phrase: “who-do voodoo cocktail” Whatever it was he drank, without realizing it, he may have seen Alexis as she really is without his discontent getting in the way. Nicely told.
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Nice hypothesis, Frank.
Glad you enjoyed this one.
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Mixed up confusion….sweet
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A bit of a wreck!
Thanks, Dylan
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That was great, Nancy!
(and here’s my happy pill)
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Thanks so much, Chris.
Glad to be your happy pill!
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…surely, on the backs of those cans, in semi-flowery script, the simple directive: “Drink Me’
(Bottled and canned: Sonora, Mexico)
fun Six, yo
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Doubtful my MC needed any prompting.
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Alexis never really liked me. So, I put her back in the box she came from. š
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A Ha! The real back story behind that great, big-shouldered Talking Heads song. This is fantastic!
š¶”Letting the days go by//water going under …” Once in a Lifetime
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Thanks, Liz! I had such fun writing this!
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Thems the breaks š
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LOL! Easy come, easy go! š¤·š¼āāļø
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This was really nicely done! For such a short piece, it certainly said an awful lot about this guy, including his apparent fixation on big boobs and wanting to look like Michael Jordan! You did a great job with his confusion.
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Thanks so much, D!
There was a guy a knew a few years back who was perpetually dazed and confused and had an incredible penchant for smoking and gambling! He also lived/lives in his mother’s basement and I don’t see that changing ever. He may read this; if so, it’s the truth and he knows it so….. Anyway, he was my muse but I added a few peccadilloes which he did not have just to make the tale more interesting.
Living life on the corner of Dumb and Dumber. š šµāš«
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Oh man!
It’s been my experience that no matter how accurately detailed, folks simply don’t recognize themselves in a story…
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I think Amazon has more of those mini-cans of ecstasy juice.
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Oh, I know they do!
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You wrote like a guy in this one, and I mean that as a compliment….
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And that’s exactly how I took it, John.
Thanks very much!
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Magnificent ‘off the cuff’ story-telling. This blew me away as I could relate to a lot of it.
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One of the things I enjoy about writing (and there are a lot) is living on the edge between fiction and reality, being able to incorporate the two and leave people wondering just how much of a story is true. It’s great fun to go to extremes and live vicariously through my characters. But there has to be some truth behind it which is why you’ll very rarely find me writing about SciFi or the supernatural. I’m much better at writing about things I can relate to.
Thanks for your great comments today, Matt.
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I am envious of people like you and my friend Sharon who have such vivid imaginations and live on that edge you so poignantly described. Yes, when the story in the reader’s mind steps out of the fictional world and becomes ‘real’ to them to the point they feel introspective and wonder if it was tailor made for them. That seemingly nondescript quality in a writer cannot be taught because it must be something the writer can relate to – as you mentioned. It becomes living and breathing and transcends the barrier of writer / reader.
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In a nutshell, yes. Well and succinctly put, Matt.
I appreciate your comments.
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never know what’s in these drinks ..or our minds lol…
wonderful, Nancy š¤š«
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Gotta read the fine print. Even then, it’s iffy.
Thanks so much, Destiny. š©¶
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my pleasure š¤
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āRorer 714s, dropping acid, and then popping amyl nitrate all at the same timeā¦ā
Been there, done that. Did you write this about me?
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We Sicilians take an oath of silence and we never break it or reveal our sources. You wouldn’t want me to break the vow of omerta. Only bad things can happen.
How do you know this isn’t about me?
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If the shoe fitsā¦. š
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I’m at a point in my life where I can afford to not give a damn about what people think I may have done 50 years ago. Hell, I don’t really care that much what they think now. I have a feeling you can relate.
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I can definitely relate.
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What a surreal dream like story
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Exactly! Bordering on insanity.
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