Written for Quadrille Monday dVerse Poets Pub; De Jackson is
asking us to create a 44-word poem using the word “Friday”.
My poem is a Dectina Refrain:
1st line is 1 syllable, 2nd line is 2 syllables
3rd line is 3 syllables, and so on for 9 lines;
the 10th line is comprised of the first four lines
as one stand-alone sentence.
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Our
Friday
night dinner
we wait all week
to sit on the couch
and eat sexy pizza
with cheese like hot melted love,
gooey and deliciously good,
and we drink tall glasses of red wine.
Our Friday night dinner we wait all week
NAR©2024
44 Words
#TGIF
This is “Makin’ Whoopee” by Dr. John and Rickie Lee Jones
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Great read. Another interesting form….must try!
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Oh I hope you do and enjoy it as much as I do!
Thanks!
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Pizza and Love…perfect
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That’s my favorite topping!
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Ooooh, Yeah, LOVE IT!
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Thanks, Vee. Who doesn’t love pizza? 😉🥰
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It’s such a great comfort food!
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how come my pizza isn’t so lol…🤭
so lovely, Nancy…🤍
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Clearly your guy is not delivering! LOL 😉
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🤭….lolz 😂
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That Friday anticipation — You wrap it all up beautifully in 44 words!
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Thank you kindly!
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Love it! And I now want sexy pizza.
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Well, who doesn’t! 😄
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My kinda Friday night!
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I like the way you think, Keith!
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Perfect pairing of Dr John and Rikki Lee, saucy, stretchy pizza, all Makin’ Whoopie!
Well orchestrated, Nancy!
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Thanks, Liz! I’m very much in favor of sexy pizza!
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Spectacular Nancy. You are very creative. I gather there might be truth in this poem?
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Thanks, Matt!
In answer to your question, I’ll say this: To have a happy & healthy 52-year-long relationship, a little creativity comes in handy. 😊
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52 years! Wow. Congratulations Nancy. I think you have given me some good ideas of how my kids and I will enjoy Friday night lol.
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Thanks! It certainly doesn’t feel like that much time has gone by and, of course, neither of us looks any older! Three quarters of my life has been with my amazing man.
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Those are such beautiful sentiments Nancy.
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Thank you, Matt.
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This is wonderful, Nancy! You’ve now inspired me to participate… I was on the fence…
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Thanks, Dale! That great!
Jump on in; the pizza’s hot!
Buon appetito! 🍷 🍕
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Woot!
Well… can’t join you on your pizza, that would just be intrusive…
Grazie! 🍷 🍕
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Cin cin, cara mia! 🍷
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Cin Cin! 🍷🍷
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Love it N.! Friday nights are indeed special.
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You know it!
Thanks, D!
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A day many of us use to unwind. Some weeks seem longer than others. 🤔
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You got that right, Susan!
Thanks for stopping by.
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You’re most welcome. ❤
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“sexy pizza
with cheese like hot melted love,”
Love it.🍕
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Does sound good, doesn’t it, Melissa? 😋
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So much implied expectation
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Thanks, Sadje. It’s all about what’s not said!
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Very true.
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Friday night pizza… sounds delicious… I would rather do a three-course dinner.
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Sometimes the only answer is instant gratification. 😊
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Yay for pizza night and your saucy, sexy poem, Nancy💓
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Thanks, Cindy! We’re all for sexy pizza night! 🍷
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very neat, expectation is often better than reality 💜💜
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Anticipation is making me wait, making me crazy … goes the song. 🩶
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