Written for Six Sentence Story #309; the required word is “core”
John Black always keeps his tools in the finest condition, each one hanging on the rack with incredible precision like soldiers standing at attention, lined up by size depending on his needs, clean, sharp and at the ready at all times.
There are saws that could cut down the largest tree and mallets strong enough to pound huge spikes into boulders, screwdrivers and files of every shape and size, pliers to yank out the longest of nails and wrenches to loosen joints rusted together, planes that could shave off the thinnest slice of wood and blades that could cut through the toughest leather.
John Black scrubs his tools clean after each use so they are gleaming, polished and waiting for his next job, whenever that might be .… every day and into the night …. and he is ready, a busy man who never waits to be called, a man who easily finds his own clientele.
John Black is not a carpenter or a plumber, not a roofer or a mason, not a mechanic or a custodian – no, his job is of a different nature, his instruments weapons meant to inflict the most pain a human could endure – for you see, John Black is a psychopath, a stalker of the innocent, a torturer, a murderer; oh, yes, his tools serve him well, sate his sadistic needs and, being an unassuming man, his victims are so very easy to find.
John Black lives nowhere yet everywhere, next to your sister or your daughter or your mother or you, so keep your doors locked and never go out alone, even to check your mailbox or collect your newspaper or to bring in the cat, for he is ever vigilant, constantly at the ready, waiting patiently to show you in the minutest of detail what every last one of his tools can do in the hands of a master.
Come now, don’t look at me like that …. I’m just the storyteller telling the story of John Black who’s a bad seed, the devil’s spawn, a blot on the escutcheon, a moldering apple, rotten to the core.
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What a good story. Well done, Nancy.
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Love the story, Nancy🔥
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Thanks, Cindy. This was sick fun!
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😜🩷
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Tools of the trade…
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Everyone needs an outlet.
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It is important to take care of one’s tools properly if one is to be taken seriously…
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Excellent point and I couldn’t agree more!
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😉
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Good description of John Black as rotten to the core but with an unassuming surface.
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Thanks, Frank. The idea was to paint a picture of someone who blended in with the crowd, like a good psychopath would do.
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Great story!
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Thanks, Belladonna. We just never know.
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“…who easily finds his own clientele…”
Now I get that hint, lol. But not, lol!
Excellent setup, Nancy, for what turned out to not be the ending I suspected! (at least I can blame you for any nightmares tonight 😆)
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Exactly the reaction I was hoping for, Denise! I apologize in advance for any nightmares you may experience tonight but I doubt my powers are that far-reaching. Maybe you should check your locks, though, cos sometimes you just don’t know. 😳
Thank you, Denise!
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And somehow, when I published my story, I left out an entire ¶. It’s in there now; sweet dreams.
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Ncely done!*
Then… in the middle, I found myself re-reading the “…so keep your doors locked” sentence, thinking I missed something. And then the slow reveal.
very effective writing
*your transition. did not see that coming. in part ’cause I was taken by the detailed description of the tools… (gotta be a cool Greco-Roman word for the rhetorical device of such an engaging list ‘multithingerotica’ or something… )
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Multithingerotica …. I can dig it.
While other women are shopping for fresh laundry-scented candles or bud vases that hold a single rose, I’m checking out the combination wrench sets at Lowes. I like a man with an impressive tool belt and I cannot lie.
Thanks, Clark.
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And no one …. not even me …. noticed I left out an entire ¶. It’s been reinserted.
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May he keep his tools to himself!
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Now deep down inside you know there’s zero chance of that happening. Men like John Black …. they just don’t know how to rein it in.
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indeed
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good story
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Thanks, Di.
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A chilling tale ….
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Lock the doors …. and windows!
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Is John Black a friend of Mr. Decker or an acquaintance of Nick Cave (who also had the bad seeds)?
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Ha! Good point, Glyn.
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Very clever! You sucked me right in, which means I should be really carefully heading out to the mailbox today…
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Oh, good! You fell right into my trap!
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There was a little voice that said “This is Nancy, she’ll probably veer from the sweet.” Did I listen? No, I did not because you do weave the nice in sometimes, just to keep us off balance.
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Oooh so scary 😱
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No doubt because we know this really happens.
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Yes, to some it might but I shudder to meet such a character in real life
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As do I ….. big time!
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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It was so innocent at the start! I shudder to think of what those tools have done.
Excellent storytelling.
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That’s a great comment, Sweets! And exactly how I wanted you to feel.
Glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you!
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Oh my goodness! I could kind of sense what was coming…but still…I’m double-locking my door and windows tonight!
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Great, Vee! I hoped you would feel the buildup as you went along. Always best to lock those doors …. and windows!
Thank you!
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You’re most welcome!
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This John White must be as white as evil, haha. I love the moral of the story. Imma tell my sisters to lock their doors tight for John Black. Amazing, piece.
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Excellent plan, Lam! Thanks!
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